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How are My Characters?
Great! Descriptive, creative, realistic, fun, and original. 50%  50%  [ 3 ]
Good. Creative, easy to realate to.. But, not so original. 17%  17%  [ 1 ]
You could do much better, try adding some touches, and make it more of you own. 17%  17%  [ 1 ]
Not so good, Mary-Sue and dull. 17%  17%  [ 1 ]
Horrible. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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PostPosted: November 29th, 2006, 12:25 am 
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Another charrie for 'The Child Time has Forgotten', The Lord Dricyn Bochendir!!!

Dricyn: *peeks in* IV!

*SG pushes Dricyn out of room*


EDIT: Its spelled C-H-I-L-D not C-H-I-L-E. *slaps forehead* Yeah, right, it is 'The CHILE Time has Forgotten'!!! Yeah, that'll sell well, Suuuuuuure...

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*blows horn* Alright! Time for another charrie! I give you... Rivhon!!! *cough* Ok, if anyone was wondering, He is the brother of Meldawen's character, Rhiannon.

PLEASE VOTE ON THE POLL!

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PostPosted: December 17th, 2006, 12:22 am 
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OK! New charrie UP! My first Eragon rpg... its about time!! *cough* anyway... Take a look. :D




<center>FEEDBACK IS APRECIATED!</center>


Really! It is!!!

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PostPosted: December 18th, 2006, 7:20 pm 
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Thats good SG!

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PostPosted: December 18th, 2006, 7:37 pm 
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Thanks, Eruraina! :)

POLL VOTES PLEEEEEAAAAAASE!

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I did! I did! I did!

Check out my Art Gallery and coment!(siggy)

I got new characters on mine!

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PostPosted: December 18th, 2006, 7:46 pm 
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thanks!

Alrighty!

Oooh, really? cool! I'll go over there...

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PostPosted: December 31st, 2006, 5:47 pm 
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A few more new cherries... though I make a lot of new ones! lol! I also deleted some... I'm moving the ones I use most to the posts near the beginning were the rpg has died and I don't use the character anymore! My character Eruraina is better... check out the pic of her! I found a pic that was Eowyn, but she had ornage hair, so I just needed to put the scar and change the eye color! lol...

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I think your characters are pretty good, SG. Some of them aren't so original *coughdragonridercoughcough*, but they're pretty close to it--at least most of them.

Aearion is one of the most promising characters I've seen on this forum. Keep up the good work!

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hm... most likely Aerion has become more promising than Eruraina. Her story has gotten... strange. Though I didn't mean to do that! The first rpg I was in, I used her, and that rpg just went... wacko!

And, I kinda agree with Aerandir... you Next Generation char isn't as original... it's mostly the dragon... but I guess it's more... realistic... than my Eragon character *couph2dragons,Galbatorix'sdaughtercough* so, yeah...

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Lol, Eruraina. The 2 dragons + Galbatorix's daughter makes it more Mary-Sueish than unoriginal. I don't know how many other people have multiple dragons and are Galbatorix's child since I stay away from Eragon RPGs (too boring, imo), but I'd say it's just Mary-Sueish.

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yeah... I know! It's original though, me thinks... Though I've been thinking forever on killing off one of the dragons...

And it would half help if I knew what a Mary-Sue character ment! I kinda didn't get it with the poem the mods posted up...

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A Mary-Sue/Marty-Stu character is one who is a really good fighter (normally), is gorgeous/handsome, basically flawless, and in some cases, is in love with a Canon character who loves her/him back. Or is related to/good friends with a Canon character (in this case, Galbatorix).

Now, that's a really basic description--if you asked someone else, you'd probably get a slightly different reply, maybe not containing some of the things I mentioned, but listing others.

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hm... my char isn't flawless... she's in love, but with her dragons... and she's not the prettiest... I'm pretty sure she has an ugly scar on her face...

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Mary-Sues don't have to be all of that--those are just some characteristics of one. I'd say just the fact that your character is the daughter of Galbatorix makes her pretty Mary-Sueish.

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yeah... *goes over characters* pretty sure thats my only marry-sue... though I've deleted the ones were the rpg has died...

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