On the remot world of Tascen there was once a young man by the name of Valen Sendors.

But before the story is told his planet must be explained. His unusual life styl on his homeworld would shape his destiny for a life time of adventure.


Tascen was a rather small planet in the cors diameter. Aproxamently 500 miles in diameter the small ball of land consisted of loos sand like dirt. There were no plants, no watter.

But from this central core were uncountable numbers of large, medium, and small arms that stretched out from it in zigzag paterns, small areas and bulges, splits and forks. The total area of the planet was so numerous that even the core world of Coruscant could not hold as many inhabatents in it's towering buildings and magnificent pools of life.

The land of Tascen was soft, those who walked on it sinking in a foot or more with each step. The inhabatents have since the creation literaly swam through the dirt as means of movement. However many allso walk on the surface, the local Terins able to stay on top by means unknown to the outside worlds.

In the land there was no watter. The watter would float out in mid space between the arms and away fromt he land, as would many chuncks of earth. The small bubles of watter would replenish themselves as the humidity gathered in clumps, the watter changing areas frequently.

Valen lived hi life as a normal Terin boy... Until he reached the age of 15 when the Empire came to conquore his world.

Valen had no intentions of working for the Empire, being killed, or inslaved. Infront of his face he watched his family, friends, and nieghbors be taken away as slaves not knowing if he would ever see them again.

He himself was taken... Taken to the remot world of Tatooine and sold on the slave markets. His "Owner" Cleg Yet was harsh and brutle, beating him when he would not preform his duties properly.

After a year of service to his hatted master he had taken enough. One day while Cleg was in his shop working Valen took a knife. He stabbed it into his arm where he had found that his transmiter was located and ripped the thing out. Blood rushed from his arm as he held inthe screams of agony and pain.

Running out the dorr he was stopped by Cleg who stood in shock. Valen threw the knife into Cleg's heart and dived into the soft sand of Tatooine adn swam away.

Arriving at the next town he desperatly needed to clean his wound that was now filled with sand. Stumbling accros a man who offered to help he gave him a chance. Zen Blenk was the man's name.

Zen talked to Valen, figuring he was a runaway slave. Zen then told Valen of a group called the Rebelion who were fighting against he empire. After assisting him Zen offered to take him off world but Valen kindly refused. Tatooine was much closer to home that he owuld be on any other planet.

Soon Valen began hiring on with local mercinaries and bounty hunters, most working against the Empire or local gangs. Valen soon became quite distinguished for his skills and turned pro at the age of 19.

If at any time you are stopped by a rough looking man with medium length Dark blue hair, dark green, light leather armor,a gun hanging on his side, and a repeater slung across his back acompanied by a long sword.... well then I wish you well for you are dealing with one of Tatooines moste renown bounty hunters and hired guns.


Ok... a bit weird but it came to mind so I figured I would write it down and post it here.

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Very nicely done!!! I love the new planet, it's original and quite cool....... lol

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Thanks. After it had spun around in my head for a while I figured I mideswell give it a story. So...

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That's what I usually do... I'm plotting another character at the moment... I think it might be Viree.... I'm not sure.... *muses out loud*lol

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Yeah... I know how the "I'm ot sure" things can go. lol I change things allot

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Yep.... Luinnar Bluefire's story took me over two years to fully integrate everything to Tolkien's world.... AND add her into the whole LotR trilogy without leaving out anything or adding too much.... lol

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~The Mercenary A-U Gentlewoman~

lol. That's cool. I did that once with a character. Put him through the first two movies and fit everything in to where it would all be acurate.

But I don't remember much about him because it was a just after watching The Two Towers.


But when I do that I like go through a movie in my mind of each and every action.

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I put her through every book.... I added a few scenes, I exchanged a few parts, and Tolkien probably rolled in his grave!! lol

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~The Mercenary A-U Gentlewoman~

lol. yeah, I dod that too. I'v done it with starwars with several different characters.

One I even worked out what he did the whole time between episode three and four.

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Wow...... Talk about busily bored..... lol

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~The Mercenary A-U Gentlewoman~

Yeah, I know. But where I am I have nothing to do realy besides creat things in my imagination.

Since I am homeschooled and live out int he contry I have no friends to go do things with... and there is not much to do on our farm iether so...

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Oh, I'm sorry.... I live in the country too....

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It's not your fault. lol. All considering i actualy am very fortunate to live where I live I guess... just isn't much for excitement.

Honestly I couldn't stand to live in a large city. I would be miserable.

How far out in the contry do you live?

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Uhhh..... About half an hour out of town.....

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That's pretty far.

We actualy live in town. But our town has only like 100 people in it so it's basicly country. lol

But 90% of the time we are out at our grandmother's farm because we do all the farming and it is a mile and a half out of town.

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Oh... Well, a mile an' a half's not that bad.... It's more than that to my boyfriend's house, and he's what you call 'the guy next door'....lol

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