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| Author: | Envied Alexander [ April 18th, 2006, 9:07 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Cade's charrys |
ok in a Harry Potter RP i am playing Viktor Krum's kid, the only girl so far. i just want to know if she can be inproved. here she is, ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- name: Sofia Ana Krum nickname:Latiebog age:16 year:6th apperance: 5ft tall, long black hair,very pretty, but she hardly ever smiles and when she smiles its worth it. wand: 9 1/2 in, dragonheart string hornbeam. Animagus: none at this time Personality: hardly ever says anything, but when she speaks up watch yourself something smart and witty is comeing. she hates school, she is a fairly good student but she just hates it. pets:she has a owl named Kitty with her, and a cat named Jack back at home. Talents:she can speak russian and all that good stuff, and she is a wonderful chaser. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- so thats it. |
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| Author: | Annabel Lee [ April 22nd, 2006, 12:30 am ] |
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Ya might want to capitalize some of the things at the begining of sentances |
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| Author: | Envied Alexander [ April 22nd, 2006, 1:43 pm ] |
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shut up bud. (and i can say that for i know her in RL) |
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