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Author:  Envied Alexander [ April 18th, 2006, 9:07 pm ]
Post subject:  Cade's charrys

ok in a Harry Potter RP i am playing Viktor Krum's kid, the only girl so far. i just want to know if she can be inproved. here she is,

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name: Sofia Ana Krum
nickname:Latiebog
age:16
year:6th
apperance: 5ft tall, long black hair,very pretty, but she hardly ever smiles and when she smiles its worth it.
wand: 9 1/2 in, dragonheart string hornbeam.
Animagus: none at this time
Personality: hardly ever says anything, but when she speaks up watch yourself something smart and witty is comeing. she hates school, she is a fairly good student but she just hates it.
pets:she has a owl named Kitty with her, and a cat named Jack back at home.
Talents:she can speak russian and all that good stuff, and she is a wonderful chaser.
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so thats it.

Author:  Annabel Lee [ April 22nd, 2006, 12:30 am ]
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Ya might want to capitalize some of the things at the begining of sentances

Author:  Envied Alexander [ April 22nd, 2006, 1:43 pm ]
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shut up bud. (and i can say that for i know her in RL)

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