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Post subject: Cade's charrys Posted: April 18th, 2006, 9:07 pm |
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Joined: 30 March 2006 Posts: 5406 Location: Alabama, USA
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ok in a Harry Potter RP i am playing Viktor Krum's kid, the only girl so far. i just want to know if she can be inproved. here she is,
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name: Sofia Ana Krum
nickname:Latiebog
age:16
year:6th
apperance: 5ft tall, long black hair,very pretty, but she hardly ever smiles and when she smiles its worth it.
wand: 9 1/2 in, dragonheart string hornbeam.
Animagus: none at this time
Personality: hardly ever says anything, but when she speaks up watch yourself something smart and witty is comeing. she hates school, she is a fairly good student but she just hates it.
pets:she has a owl named Kitty with her, and a cat named Jack back at home.
Talents:she can speak russian and all that good stuff, and she is a wonderful chaser.
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so thats it.
_________________ <center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.” at one point, I was alejandrah.
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Post subject: Posted: April 22nd, 2006, 12:30 am |
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Joined: 30 March 2006 Posts: 2880 Location: Tejas Country:
Gender: Female
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Ya might want to capitalize some of the things at the begining of sentances
_________________ "Holmes is a little too scientific for my tastes -- it approaches to cold-bloodedness"
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Post subject: Posted: April 22nd, 2006, 1:43 pm |
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Joined: 30 March 2006 Posts: 5406 Location: Alabama, USA
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shut up bud. (and i can say that for i know her in RL)
_________________ <center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.” at one point, I was alejandrah.
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