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Is this a good introduction. please be honest.
Yes it was very good. 27%  27%  [ 3 ]
It was fine 55%  55%  [ 6 ]
It wasnt that good. 18%  18%  [ 2 ]
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Saedd was one of the wounded soldiers he hardly breath in and out. He was bleeding all over. He let himself fall onto the floor after the door was closed.

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Simbelmyne suddenly recognized Saedd, the soldier who helped her before, lying on the floor, badly wounded. She rushed forward to him and asked "My Lord, what has happened to you? How can I help you?"

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Saedd can not even open his eyes because it was hurting so much. There is no way he can stand on his feet. He heard a voice of Simbelmyne but could not understand it. He forced himself to get up but it was no use he let himself fall again. At last he yelled "it hurts so much".

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The elf stood a way off, watching them both from the side of cold eyes as she helped secure the doors, throwing debries and ruble to the men there who were attempting to build a barricade.

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"I need someone to help me!" Simbelmyne thought. She was not a skilled healer, and now she hardly knew what to do. She stood up to fetch some water for Saedd so he could drink and she could wash his wounds.

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Saedd turned his head to the right and the left so many times. His wound was so deep and hurting a lot. He noticed Simbelmyne later. He felt something cooler and relaxing on his body but also hurt him as well. He said in a depressed voice of tone "Go away. You do not have to share my fate. Go away and save yourself. I am done here"

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'No! I will not let you here to die if the orcs finally break through this door! There's still hope for you!' Simbelmyne answered while ripping off some cloth of her sleeve to bind Saedd's wounds.

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"They are almost at the gate. It is over, Simbelmyne. You are going to die if you stick with me in here." Saedd spoke in a hopeless voice of tone.

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' I won't leave you here! If I go, you must come with me!Are you able to walk with my help?' Simbelmyne asked.

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(Sorry Guys! I have been held up with a lot of school work and my internet wouldn't let me connect for the longest time :( Back into the RP!)

After Simbelmyne had helped her kill the troll. She was lost from everyone for the longest time she was also badly woulded. She saw Seadd and Simbelmyne tring to help him. Looking at Seadd she was suprised that both she and he were still alive. Her clothes drowned in her own blood and the blood of others. She made her way over too the pair, clutching the giant cut in her left side.

"Come on Seadd! You can't give up now. We have all come so far...We all need to se this through till the end. Simbelmyne, I will help to get him to safety." They both helped Seadd to his feet, his arm over each of thier necks. As Rinoa looked back she could she the spears of the orcs come through the gate.

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(Welcome back, Rinoa! And thanks for posting here, I nearly forgot about this rp!)

Simbelmyne was glad that Rinoa came to help them, but as she looked back she was shocked. The orcs had nearly broken the second gate now. "Come on, hurry! We have to get him away from here!" Simbelmyne said to Rinoa.

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Saedd heard Rinoa's words. But for him the war is already over. He could hear the crying of the people who ran away and screamed. Everyone that passed him near made him more miserable and hopeless. He wanted to go no more but Rinoa and Simbelmyne helped him up at his feet. As he got up at his feet, he saw the orcs are about to broke the second gate." This is over. We are all gonna die" he yelled.

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Rinoa looked at Simbelmyne and Seadd. She heard Seadd's words and she looked back yes the orcs were gaining on them. "All is not lost yet!" As their pace quickened she looked for something that could help the escape. She saw nothing but she looked forward and saw the remainder of her ranger party coming towards her.
"Simbelmyne, please get Seadd to safety. My party shall hold them off the orcs as long as possible." She drew her sword and ordered her archers to fire. "We all shall meet again! I promise!" Rinoa said as the orcs were now almost to her small party.

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Simbelmyne nodded when Rinoa told her what to do. She turned to Saedd agian and walked on. "Come on now, it's not that far! We'll make it to the third gate!"

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As the orcs started to come at her one after the other. She looked for a brief moment to see how far Symbelmyne and Seadd were. She saw an orc running after them. The orc had gotten passed her men. She took out her bow and got the orc in the head. By this Simbelmyne and Seadd were almost through the third gate.

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Erana stopped for a few seconds to catch breath again. She turned around to see if Rinoa needed help. Exactly at that moment she saw one orc running towards her and Saedd. She quickly turned towards the gate that was not far away and said to Saedd "We need to go again, just a few meters!" She was worried about Saedd's condition.

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