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Post subject: Posted: March 25th, 2006, 11:46 am |
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Elegost thought he went too far. He approached with a gentle tone of his voice.
"I am sorry my lady" he said. "I am really appreciated that I met with you".
He sniffed his nose. "I will be getting into the subject quickly." While he was acting. He sounded somebody said a gondorian. His gaze turned on that man.
Turn back on the lady " I am sorry but i just saw a friend of mine. I will be in Lothlorien for some time."
"Yeah we had a king now "he hardly said it. Elegost knew he was being watched by Lady Este knowingly he hugged the man he does not know. "Brother" he added.
"So where are you from?" asked hastily. Alatar did not answer before Lady Este got into the conversation again.
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Post subject: Posted: March 25th, 2006, 11:51 am |
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"So what's your name and what do you want with Feanor?" Este asked again, she was wary of this man.
Undome came up to her and held her hand but Este told her to go and wait with Asea, she didn't want her to get hurt if this man turned nasty.
_________________ "Without music, life would be a mistake." - Friedrich Nietzsche

"Make happy those who are near, and those who are far will come."
Fwee!

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Post subject: Posted: March 25th, 2006, 11:59 am |
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Onònion wasn`t known here, perhaps welcome, but yet a stranger and he decided to find a peaceful place where he could relax. He found a small pondl like and sat down by it throwing his bag onto the ground, he quickly looked around and relaxed just letting time pass.
_________________  Let him curse my name On these blood stained pages of misery Let him call me a tyrant so cruel Let him curse my name, but remember the truth!
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Post subject: Posted: March 25th, 2006, 12:07 pm |
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Meanwhile Asea had just left Ononion at a pond...
Asea saw little Undome skipping towards her and she was quickly told that "mummy said to come and wait with you." Undome smiled and showed Asea the Red book. She took Undome and sat down with her so she could see Este talking to a man up at the house.
_________________ "Without music, life would be a mistake." - Friedrich Nietzsche

"Make happy those who are near, and those who are far will come."
Fwee!

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Post subject: Posted: March 25th, 2006, 12:13 pm |
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When he saw she insisted on asking there was no choice but to answer. He asked to "Alatar, that would you excuse us?". He responded yes but he looked suspected a little bit.
"Lady I come with the peace it is no use of fear from me as I have said earlier on I am on your side in this fight. So you wanted to know my name in Gondor they call me Elegost of Dunedain in the service of Gondor and you my lady."
He did not believe what he is saying. It was strange that an elf could buy his lies.
"I did not come with good news as you may foresaw there are orcs to walk on your realms. Gondor's only purpose is help at that moment". He delivered a paper which is the message and contains the sign of Gondor. "It says this is a gondor's aid to the race of elves that fought bravely on the battlefield alongside men. We sent the mightiest and wittiest warrior". If he stays with you, that would be much better in the time of need".
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Post subject: Posted: March 25th, 2006, 12:17 pm |
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Alatar looked at the guy, who called him "brother".
"Real Gondorian" - thought and smirked, but didn't say anything.
"I'll look around, ok?"- He asked Este
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Post subject: Posted: March 25th, 2006, 12:22 pm |
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Este really didn't trust this man, he was strange and he seemed like no Dunedain; Asea was a Dunedian and she was nothing like him.
"My husband Feanor will be back later, you can talk to him. If you've got something to hide I suggest you tell me now, I will not be fooled by anyone let alone a man. I have the gift of forsight and I do not trust someone who wanders so freely in to Rivendell, I know you have another purpose." Este said. Her voice was quiet but sharp.
_________________ "Without music, life would be a mistake." - Friedrich Nietzsche

"Make happy those who are near, and those who are far will come."
Fwee!

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Post subject: Posted: March 25th, 2006, 12:27 pm |
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((Okay, my character is walking and discovering Imladris. Gotta go, cu  )
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Post subject: Posted: March 25th, 2006, 12:35 pm |
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"another purpose you said it was so upset that you did not trust me." He thought of running away in this moment. He had to stay in Lothlorien where it is safe from any other land.
"At this minute he came up with an idea. "How can I ever prove to you my loyalty? Every men need one chance you know I would never disappoint you."
His eyes were shinned. If you will excuse me, I will leave now.
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Post subject: Posted: March 25th, 2006, 12:46 pm |
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"You don't have to leave, my husband will want to speak with you. However I can see the deception in your eyes and if you will carry on there will be consiquences." Este said in a low voice, she didn't want to cause a stir.
(I presume that Elegost is here under false pretences as you put He did not believe what he is saying. It was strange that an elf could buy his lies. Sorry if I'm wrong. And just to make sure you're clear on where this is set it's Rivendell.)  (I hope you don't think I'm mean, I'm just a little confused.)
_________________ "Without music, life would be a mistake." - Friedrich Nietzsche

"Make happy those who are near, and those who are far will come."
Fwee!

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Post subject: Posted: March 25th, 2006, 12:55 pm |
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(You are such a good writer)
(I am mysterious as I introduced in the first page. Rivendell I am planning something interesting do not be afraid)
"Okay"he replied. You understand everything I am not a bad man. Just I need of a place to stay." I will tell you everything some day I must go now."
He ride his horse away from the great hall of Rivendell. He was again on the roads. Alatar showed up somehow.
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Post subject: Posted: March 25th, 2006, 1:07 pm |
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(Thank you, I love writing, you are very good aswell.)
(Ok, I will ease up on Elegost a little!)
"You can stay if you like..." Este called after him. Maybe she shouldn't have been so hard on him.
_________________ "Without music, life would be a mistake." - Friedrich Nietzsche

"Make happy those who are near, and those who are far will come."
Fwee!

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Post subject: Posted: March 25th, 2006, 4:21 pm |
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"Hello, my 'Brother'" - said Alatar - "Nice to meet you."
Elegost wanted to say something, but Alatar continued.
"Where are you going? Very important business, right? You are needed in Imladris now. Dark Creatures are preparing really big attack. We should help the Elves. It's our fate. Oh, and last thing i wanted to say: I know your secret. Don't worry, I'll keep it safe."
The Blue Wizard wanted to go, but Gondorian stopped him.
"Yes, my friend?"
(I'm the worst writer here  )
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Post subject: Posted: March 25th, 2006, 4:24 pm |
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(If you have that attitude then you will be. Think positive FaZ.)
Este wandered back to where Asea and Undome were sitting, the two of them got on so well. She hoped that Undome would take to her new sister.
_________________ "Without music, life would be a mistake." - Friedrich Nietzsche

"Make happy those who are near, and those who are far will come."
Fwee!

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Post subject: Posted: March 26th, 2006, 2:29 am |
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"Then I wanted you to swear on something that is very important to you he said friendly."
Alatar showed no emotions when he continue. "Wizard huh! let see how powerful you are". Elegost drew his sword and get off the horse.
"It is not easy to trust the one who says I know your secret is". Elegost waited for him.
Suddenly he reminded the girl who was playing at the backyard but no mercy would be shown if that was gonna be an ugly fight. He thought that while Alatar looked his face.
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Post subject: Posted: March 26th, 2006, 4:30 am |
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"Do you want to fight with your friend, your ally, son of Gondor? I am Maiar of the Vala Oromë, your sword is a toy to me!"
Morinehtar's face was full of disdain. Suddenly, he changed his look, from crooked, old man to tall, powerfull wizard, he really looked like the guy from Valinor, Orome's commissionaire.
"Now, do you believe me? I don't want to fight with you. I offer you my friendship."
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