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Author:  Elenthari [ April 15th, 2007, 10:21 am ]
Post subject:  The Legend for the Phoenix
Name:Tavor
Race:Bird
Age:?
Occupation:Somewhere in Middle-Earth
pic.http://i.data.bg/07/04/15/328354_orig.jpg
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"Everything begann many years afer the first Sunrise
and the Fall of Morgoth and before the Rise of Sauron.
The life in Middle-earth got back to normal,altough
the wounds of Morgoth's evil never fully healed.
Elves and Men started to rebuild that,which they lost
during the War.The flowers blossomed and the woods fulled
up with the songs of birds...
Once more rised the Sun upon Middle-earth,once more
it touched the mountins and the woods,once more the day
came after the night...The birds woke up and they continiued
to sing in eulogy of the light.As we all know,the bird are sometimes
very curios and Tavor wasn't an expecion.Since his birth he always
looked up-to the sun but the Fire of Arien everytime burned this eyes.
One day he decidet to reach that,wich no one can-the Sun..."


That was just a short part of the story but the problem is that I can't think out many moments.I know what the story must be but i need help to end it.This is just the beginning.If you want to join you're welcome!I'm sure it will be gerat...
I posted my charakters in The Barrow-downs -The Legend of the Phoenix.
Author:  Lasbelingur [ April 15th, 2007, 4:18 pm ]
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I'll join!!! Is there a story line? Cuz I don't fully understand.
Author:  Elenthari [ April 15th, 2007, 4:45 pm ]
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Yeah actually I will it write in The Barrow-downs -The Legend of the Phoenix.
Author:  Elenthari [ April 16th, 2007, 2:57 pm ]
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I wrote it!Go to check it!
Author:  Lasbelingur [ April 23rd, 2007, 10:50 pm ]
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I'm checking...still not understanding...I get it!!!!
Author:  Elenthari [ April 25th, 2007, 10:33 am ]
Post subject:  Re: The Legend for the Phoenix
Elenthari wrote:
Name:Tavor
Race:Bird
Age:?
Occupation:Somewhere in Middle-Earth
pic.http://i.data.bg/07/04/15/328354_orig.jpg
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Everything begann many years afer the first Sunrise
and the Fall of Morgoth and before the Rise of Sauron.
The life in Middle-earth got back to normal,altough
the wounds of Morgoth's evil never fully healed.
Elves and Men started to rebuild that,which they lost
during the War.The flowers blossomed and the woods fulled
up with the songs of birds...
Once more rised the Sun upon Middle-earth,once more
it touched the mountins and the woods,once more the day
came after the night...The birds woke up and they continiued
to sing in eulogy of the light.As we all know,the bird are sometimes
very curios and Tavor wasn't an expecion.Since his birth he always
looked up-to the sun but the Fire of Arien everytime burned this eyes.
One day he decidet to reach that,wich no one can-the Sun..."

...Tavor's preparations continued many days.But when he was ready,he started his perilious journey.Nobody knew how long the road is and Tavor had to pass through many dangers-the unbearable hot and the freezing cold ,the wanton wind and untamable storms.But for all that the brave bird reached his purpose-The Boat of Arien.On the 246 day of his journey Tavor alighted on the deck of Ariens boat.He looked upon the mighty Guardian of the Last Fruit from The Golden Tree LaurelinLast Fruit from The Golden Tree Laurelin-The Last Memory of the Light of Valinnor. And she was the last thing he saw with his real eyes...
"-Why did you come here,Creature of Arda?"
"-I've comed to bow before the Lady of Fire."
"-Don't you know that you are going to pay with your life for your bravery Tavor.Yes I know your name.Many times you looked up to the Sun and many times I've burned your gaze.I've tried to protect you from your own cuiriosity!"
In these moment Tavor fired up.The last words he said were:
"My porpose is done!I was the only one living create who saw the how beautiful is Arien,the Lady of Fire,altough her beaty burns the eyes and the flesh.Suilanna,Arien o Valinnor!-And he turned to ashes.
Arien's heart was touched by these act of bravery from this little creature.As she layed her boat on the shores of Aman and again her light illuminated Valinnor once more,she visited immediatly Manwe and Varda..."
Author:  Lasbelingur [ April 25th, 2007, 10:42 am ]
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I don't get it.
Author:  Lasbelingur [ April 25th, 2007, 10:43 am ]
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I don't get it.
Author:  Elenthari [ April 25th, 2007, 10:48 am ]
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(Now I'll tell a little more of the story line in Barrow-downs)
Author:  Lasbelingur [ April 25th, 2007, 10:54 am ]
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(( Iget it he's a bird who wanted to go to the sun!!! right? And when he got there he turned to ashes))
Author:  Elenthari [ April 25th, 2007, 11:21 am ]
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(that's right!:) Yes and later Manwe returns his life,but he's a Phoenix and on th e place of his heart there is a sphere fulled with a small part of Ariens Fire!I know that my English is awful;)And it's quite hard to translate from Bulgarian in English)
Author:  Lasbelingur [ April 25th, 2007, 11:34 am ]
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(( Your English is not bad!!! So, I come in later?))
Author:  Elenthari [ April 25th, 2007, 11:39 am ]
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(Yes just finishing the part with Tavor.You know I though to write this first in the fan-fiction(as I think to do after the end)but there are moments and conversations that I still can not full.I hope this RP to help me to finish completeky my story)
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