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(Sorry it is so short... I haven't much time... and cannot remember many details as I am unable to acsess the film at the moment...)
Looking sadly at his Daughter, Gov. Swann quietly lamented, "So, this is the path you’ve chosen, is it? After all…he is a blacksmith."

(It's okay, Freya, you did good. :hug:)

Elizabeth Swann smiled, looking deep into Will's soft brown eyes. She knew once and for all that she belonged by his side forever, that they were destined for each other. "No," she said, lifting Will's hat off his head. "He's a pirate."

(that's your cue, PD! ;))

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*pops in to check up on everyone/thing*

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((Soo... will there be another Will-Eliza- Norrie meetup? :) ))


(aye, I think that would be a good idea. I've actually been wondering how it should come about... hmmm)

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[[PD - Would you mind if I begin to tie in the arrest warrants for Norrie, Will & Elizabeth in DMC? After all, Beckett has to find out somehow... :whistle:]][/color]


sure, Aramel! :) that's fine with me! and that would be cool if that was how Becky found out.

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(that's your cue, PD! ;))


lol thanks!! (guess I'll have to go back in time a bit with Will or something ;))

anyway, nice job everyone... :) I'd love to add something with Becky or William but right now I need sleep and my brain is dead.... :yawn:

oh, and PotR in case you pop in I think you could add in Mr. Mercer whenever and wherever you want to now. ;)

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*slight tap and sorry 'bout the doubt post... :blush:*

well, I guess it's my turn to add on. :)


(for Anie) Will leaned down and passionately kissed Elizabeth. The moment was a long-awaited and precious one. Something Will had only dreamt 'til this day. However, it ended all to soon. Before Will knew it his forehead was only resting against hers and he was staring into her beautiful brown eyes. He smiled at her. He couldn't think of anything to say that would do this moment justice so he kept the sweet silence.


(some Beckett for Aramel) At hearing about a pirate escaping a hanging so easily Lord Beckett's expression darkened. However, it darkened even more when the name of Jack Sparrow was mentioned as the very pirate who had preformed the escape. It had been too long since he'd heard any mention of Jack however this may be just what he needed. Jack stayed in the Caribbean. The Caribbean was where the Dead Man's Chest had been rumored to be. Beckett's eyes slightly glittered at the thought. In the past few years he had been gathering important information on this certain object from the old pirate lore his clerk had picked up and from some prisoners who had been vital information givers. Some of them had been willing, some had to be persuaded. Either way he had learned quite a bit about the Chest and it's owner. Beckett's mind suddenly turned and he could not hide the inquisitive look that spread across his face. "and where did this occur, who was the commander who let him escape, and who helped Jack with the escape?"



(btw, Aramel, does Will know or has he heard about Vari from Jack.... because if he has heard/know her we could have them meet up. :))

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(great job, Merry! That's so cute! :happy:)

Elizabeth felt like dancing - finally, after so many years, Will had kissed her! He loved her! And she loved him. For a while she stood there, gazing into his eyes that were so soft and brown that she felt she could drown in them. Finally she broke the silence by whispering, "I love you too, Will."

(wee!! Commandeering stories is fun!!! :teehee:)

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Calloniel (PD) wrote:
(btw, Aramel, does Will know or has he heard about Vari from Jack.... because if he has heard/know her we could have them meet up. :))


[[If you want to have Will know, then that's fine - Vari's pretty notorious around Port Royal from all of the wanted posters and she does know Jack, too. :yes: ]]

Keyara leaned back as Beckett began firing off questions. She knew she had his attention - Perfect. "Ah, so you do know Mr. Sparrow. That makes my job all the easier. It was Commodore James Norrington that did nothing to stop him. Futher assistance came from a Mr. William Turner and a Miss Elizabeth Swann, daughter of the Governor, whom I believe also said nothing as Jack escaped from his hanging."

Watching the expression on Beckett's face, Keyara added, "But of course this information comes with a price. I want a partnership."


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thank you, Pip! :hug:

Will could still only smile down at her. "I love you too, Will" echoing in his ears. He didn't know how to respond, so he just let out a light chuckle. If someone had asked him about it later he wouldn't have been able to tell why, but this seemed to be one of those moments where you laughed because you didn't have a care in the world and you felt as light as a feather. But however beautiful this moment was Will knew it couldn't last forever. But what next? Will couldn't even think of the future at that time, he was much to happy. "I-I need go back... back to the shop..." still being rather awkward with the handling of Elizabeth and his love for her Will couldn't think of anything else to say.

(only trying to keep to the still slightly bashful side of Will that totally annoys Elizabeth here ;) hopefully it fits...)



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[[If you want to have Will know, then that's fine - Vari's pretty notorious around Port Royal from all of the wanted posters and she does know Jack, too. :yes: ]]


(Ok, I think I will then... it'll add more to the story. ;) so should Vari know about Will?)

Beckett settled back into his chair as she answered his questions. He was beginning to enjoy this encounter with Ms. Pierce. "So Commodore Norrington let Jack Sparrow escape without giving instant chase?" Lord Beckett looked over at his faithful clerk, Mr. Mercer, their eyes met in a silent consultation. Beckett turned back to his female guest. "and Port Royal's very own Governor Swann and his daughter did nothing to stop Jack either? hm, that's most unfortunate" Beckett sat back silently for a moment. "obviously this mustn't go unnoted." he once again turned toward Mr. Mercer. "Mr. Mercer, make sure our good friends at Port Royal don't soon forget the price they cost England with their..." Beckett paused "...deeds."

Once Mr. Mercer exited the room Beckett stood up and turned back to Keyara. "Price?" He looked quizzically at her as his servants brought in his hat and his cloak.



hehe... isn't this fun? :bounce: :-D

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(Oh, that's fine, it's sort of cute. :happy:)

Elizabeth narrowed her eyes in slight annoyance. "You have to go...back to the shop?" Then, realizing that even through his experiences, Will still retained some of the quiet, shy blacksmith he had been, she relented and said softly, "That's fine, I suppose. Can I see you again tomorrow?"

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(thanks... :blush: yours was nice too! Very Elizabethish :-D)

At hearing Elizabeth's response Will looked down at the ground. He hadn't meant to offend her, he simply hadn't known what to say at that moment. However, he was also disappointed she hadn't invited him over for dinner or to talk things over or anything. He lightly sighed making sure she didn't hear. She probably just wanted to talk things over with her father before they got to involved. After all this was a great leap for both of them. Even he wasn't sure if he was ready for the talk that would circulate around town about the Governor's fine daughter and the blacksmith's lad or anything else that would come with being with Elizabeth. He looked back at her "yes, tomorrow... good day 'til tomorrow... Elizabeth." Will kissed her again, then quickly turned away.

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(( I was thinking.. Beckett is going to come to arrest them soon is he? Well actually Norrie has to sail the seven seas first. trying to capture Jack and such.. he goes down the drain, looses his rank. Where does that fit in? :P ))

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Calloniel (PD) wrote:
(Ok, I think I will then... it'll add more to the story. ;) so should Vari know about Will?)


[[Yeah, that sounds good. ;-) ]]

Keyara nodded. "A price, Mr. Beckett. A partnership. You help me and I help you. My sister is a pirate - a friend of Jack's. You assist me with eliminating my enemy and I assist you with yours. Do we have an accord?"


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(( I was thinking.. Beckett is going to come to arrest them soon is he? Well actually Norrie has to sail the seven seas first. trying to capture Jack and such.. he goes down the drain, looses his rank. Where does that fit in? :P ))


actually probably not, Will. It'll take Beckett some time to get over to the Caribbean and he still probably has a while yet in London. :yes: so you can take Norrie away now on his adventures... which I guess that means Jack can enter the story, doesn't it? (hm, have to tell PotR then...)

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[[Yeah, that sounds good. ;-) ]]


okie dokie. :)

Lord Beckett placed his hat on his head and wrapped his cloak around his shoulders. "you propose a partnership with me, Ms. Pierce?" he had a slightly scoffing tone in his voice. He wondered what this girl thought she could do for one of the greatest lords in England. Any help he wanted he could easily get without having to make a partnership with her. However to humor her he continued "and why would I need consern myself with the family troubles you and your sister suffer from? If she is a pirate than in good time she will be dealt with as all of them are." he smiled cunningly at her and walked over to the door of his office.

(ok... I'll add a bit of Will later. :bye2:)

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((Hmm well I don't know... because it will be a bit boring I guess. There will be a little interaction between the characters like Vari, Will and Eliza on one side and Norrie on the other.. So why not change the story a little?
Lets say that Beckett is soon in Port Royal arrests Will and Elizabeth. At the same time Norrington will loose his rank (I guess also his house and stuff) and then Beckett tries to make a deal with him. The same one he does with Will. So then all 3 characters will at the same point start to look for Jack. Say aye? Or am I just blabbering right now?))

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[[You're doing so good at keeping Beckett in character, PD! Are you sure you haven't done this before? *raises eyebrow* :orly: :P ]]

Keyara watched as Beckett stood up and walked towards the door, speaking to her in that scoffing tone. Glancing over at the papers on his desk, she noticed one in particular. "Searching for the Dead Man's Chest, are we?" That sly smirk began creeping back onto her face.

[[I figured I'd mention DMC, since that's where we're going then; is that okay?]]


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(So are we going to need Freya, since Elizabeth is going home to talk with her father?)

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^aye, that we will, Anie! :-D

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((Hmm well I don't know... because it will be a bit boring I guess. There will be a little interaction between the characters like Vari, Will and Eliza on one side and Norrie on the other.. So why not change the story a little?
Lets say that Beckett is soon in Port Royal arrests Will and Elizabeth. At the same time Norrington will loose his rank (I guess also his house and stuff) and then Beckett tries to make a deal with him. The same one he does with Will. So then all 3 characters will at the same point start to look for Jack. Say aye? Or am I just blabbering right now?))


hmmm, interesting thoughts, Will... (no you weren't blabbering at all!) why don't we NOT have Norrie loose his title then? Why don't we have him keep it 'til Beckett comes and tells the people that Norrie is under arrest and therefore ruins his reputation that way?
also until Beckett arrives you could do a scene with Elizabeth... hmm, so I guess I should tell Freya it's time and not PotR? Oooo, my poor head! this is most confusing stuff! lol

btw, would you be interesting in switching the end around a bit? And NOT having Will Turner stab the heart? Instead having Norrie do it for Lizzie or something like that? (we, Anie and I, thought it would be a neat twist as long as you're cool to try it :))

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[[You're doing so good at keeping Beckett in character, PD! Are you sure you haven't done this before? *raises eyebrow* :orly: :P ]]

Keyara watched as Beckett stood up and walked towards the door, speaking to her in that scoffing tone. Glancing over at the papers on his desk, she noticed one in particular. "Searching for the Dead Man's Chest, are we?" That sly smirk began creeping back onto her face.

[[I figured I'd mention DMC, since that's where we're going then; is that okay?]]


(:blush: aww, you're making me blush, Aramel! thank you! :hug: I was wondering how I was doing and if it was TOOO over-the-top for Beckett or not... :happy: no, I tell the truth this is the first time I've ever played Beckett... I just know him that well. ;))

Beckett stopped in his tracks, his hand on the door knob. "what did you say?" he noticed the smirk on her face and instently he turned even colder and all expression left his face.

(short and sweet. :))

(totally ok! :))

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((I'm just chillin' in the meantime. By the by- does everyone here have some form of instant messaging? Or, if not, could we all maybe get on Gabbly sometime? All this OOC plot discussion is rather confusing to read through, especially when you're (I'm) not in on it at the moment. It might be easier to sort this all out in real-time, when we can bounce ideas off each other more quickly. Just my $0.02. ;)))


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