Really!
I thought I couldn't enter any more.
my first contest! I am soo excited!!!
sorry
[For it to make any sense at all, make sure to not forget the commas(,) and to give them room...]
Ringbearer
A hobbit on a journey went
Through darkness and through woe
He never knew the meaning, of his playing role
His life undfoling, underneath his feet
He walked through pain, and blinding grief
Not knowing if he dared to hope
That tomorrow sure would come, and the sun would wake
Friendship he bore with him
Of the finest kind
But feeling empty handed, and so out of place
Who could blame him, when he turned away?
When he thought he couldn't make it?
Thought it best to give in, to yeild and wish away
But somewhere deep within, he knew just what to do
He gathered all his courage
All his heart anew
And so he marched, to deadly flames
He fought to kill, that which had caused, all the mortal pain
Taken all the lives, of innocence and love it left to ruins
He succeded then at last, enduring all the pain
All the sorrow and the wounds, that would never change
Some things never heal to full, some scars are always left
But his success was widley known, all across the worlds
He would forever then be known, to every living soul
As the saviour, of simple life, and happiness to heart
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Thank you Orouthiel and Myra!!!
