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PostPosted: July 15th, 2005, 9:41 pm 
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Here's my entry!

Evenstar's Fate
In Imladris she walked alone
Among the white birch trees.
When Estel saw and called aloud-
"Tinuviel!", he cried.
And thus they met in Imladris,
And thus her fate began.

In Lórien she walked alone,
And there they met again.
They walked among the golden glades,
Together for a time.
And there she chose to cleave to him
And thus her fate was sealed.

In Gondor they walked together
For many blissful years.
Undomiel and Elessar,
Together they reigned well.
She was like a mortal woman.
And thus her fate was good.

In Lórien she walked alone
For Elessar was gone.
Faithful to the end she remained
And laid herself to rest
Under the falling Mallorn-leaves
And thus her fate, fufilled.


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PostPosted: July 16th, 2005, 3:14 pm 
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That was beautiful, Elenya.

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Does anyone else have their poems done yet? I would like to have them all in soon.

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Her's my entry *whew, looks like I have one of the last two spots*

And you are free to post to other site as well, if you see fit. - WMW

Into Rohan

Beneath the dwindling Middle-Earth sun
a man, an elf and a dwarf give chase
seek their fellowship friends on the run
stolen by Saruman's unholy race

Samwise and Frodo already gone
their mission was clear, to Mordor fly
destroy the one ring, within Mount Doom
in the great hall of fire, under the Eye

Already fallen, Sir Boromir
son of a steward, warrior and friend
halfling protector, drawn by power
he would be tested, and die in the end

Great son of Gondor, tragically dead
your horn is silenced, in battle wrent
your legacy marred, ring's evil dread
the weakness of men forever spent

Fellowship broken, now put to trial
three warriors tireless maintain pursuit
their friends to rescue, from foes most foul
the hardy remnant follows resolute

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PostPosted: July 17th, 2005, 10:41 pm 
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Wonderful and thank you so much for your entry. I believe we have one left.

Any takers?

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Sorry for the delay. I had mine finished a long time before but I was away over the weekend. Here's mine.

Title: Fate of the Evenstar
Author: Arien Elensar
Stanzas: 5
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Summary: Lying upon Cerin Amroth, as Arwen waits for her fate, she ponders all that has happened what is to be.

Fate of the Evenstar

Ah! Like gold fall the leaves in elvenhome.
And the Evenstar shines high above,
Guiding the souls who have left this existence.
Silent lies the deep of night, save-
For a light breeze that ruffles these raven locks.
The songs of elves are heard no more.
Abandoned lies this fading wood.
And here I wait for my inevitable fate.

Long ago in Imladris, beneath the birches white;
When I first looked into your eyes,
This day was forever wrought.
Even here, long ago, upon this sacred mound;
The twilight and the shadow we both did renounce.
And there this doom we accepted.

Many score years ago, upon a clear midsummer,
Forsaking all I came to you and our dreams we did fulfill.
As you passed, bittersweet, I felt the sorrow in my loss
And realized there the gift of men.
Crystal falls from hollowed eyes as I remember.

Now I lay, cold and grey, waiting for my doom to be.
Yet despair I not, for we shall meet again someday.
Father dear, long since sailed to undying shores;
Do you now see the setting of your Undomiel at last?

Walking through the gardens fair you’d sing a song for all to hear
And darkness closing in I feel, a familiar verse float from my lips.
Like silver tinkling, falling…
A Elbereth Gilthoniel,
silivren penna míriel
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I have lived. I am no more. I have no regrets.

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Wonderful!

Okay, how many are we waiting for? Three?

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Thanks! Yup. I think so. You might want to pm them a reminder.

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Thanks for the suggestion!

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Your welcome! I'd be happy to do it for you if you'd like.

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That's okay, but thanks for the offer. :happy: I've already PMed all the people that had spots saved, but haven't made a poem yet.

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Sorry everyone! Totally forgot for a little bit. :duh:
Here it is:

Hope

Hope is something hard to come by.
But when you find it,
reach out and grab it.
Then store it in your bag
for safe keeping.

For with hope
you will always have a friend,
the battle can be won,
the darkness will surpass,
and a new day will come.

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Lovely poem, smeagollum!

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Okay! And Nice poem smeagollum. :)

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This is my poem. Enjoy. Can we submit more then one?

Just an LOTR Girl.

Im just an LOTR girl
living in Tolkien's magical world
of elves, hobbits, and men,
of dorcy orcs, crazy wizards,
and giant eyeballs watching
your every move.

Im just a restless girl
who wanders around Tolkien's
brilliant world
of lembas and niphridel,
loved by a Ranger,
desired by many elves,
and still choosing what I want.
(I guess the Ranger will do).

Im now a Queen,
surrounding by many pretty things,
loved by my Ranger-King
who spoils me night and day
with laughter, joy and love,
in Tolkien's magical world.

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Nice poem, Lady Raine! Yes, you can submit more than one, I suppose, if you really want to.

I would like all entries in by Thursday, at the latest!

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