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Post subject: Poll- Narnia Poems Posted: November 28th, 2005, 12:32 am |
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Joined: 30 October 2005 Posts: 5188 Location: 'Dance like flame cuase theres no gravity, and now I am just a candle trying to stay lit... Country:
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1.Narnia- By Dreia
There is a world that is hard to discover
where naiads and dryads frolic with each other.
Where animals talk and giants roam
where four of our children made their home.
From across the sea the king will come
when needed, the Emporer will send his son
From Calormen to the end of the sea
Aslan is king and rules over thee
Many adventures took place in that land
a hundred year winter a captured prince and
whenever the need of the land grew too great
children would come before it was too late.
What is this land where the animals speak?
Where is the country? May I take a peek?
The answer, my friend, in your heart is flying.
Do you have to courage to answer the lion?
2. Aslan- by Mirelenasilmeriel
A great lion,
a selfless hero,
For many in Narnia
he was both friend and King,
When all seemed lost he did
what he knew was right and just.
But there was a deeper magic a work,
One not even the witch could understand,
And so when Stone Table cracked,
All of Narnia began to rejoice and have hope,
Even though for many years he was King,
He selflessly gave his life for another.
With golden fur and ruffled mane
He stands majesticly by a pavillion,
As one evil has lost and good has won.
3. Linariel- Since she entered the wardrobe...
Her brown eyes layed on the wardrobe,
Something inside her wanted to step into it,
She smiled when she opened it not even knowing what it would hold.
When she went in she found herself in...
A wood in the death of winter,
She walked towards a bright light,
Which was reflected onto the snow,
And there she saw a...
lamp post?
Who would ever thought
that you would see a lamp post in the middle of the woods
But there it was plain as day
She looked about her
Nothing but trees circled around her path
The bitter frost bit at her lips,
Making her feel more chilly
So, she stared out into the distance
Not knowning what would come
Since she entered that wardrobe...
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Post subject: Posted: November 28th, 2005, 2:37 pm |
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Joined: 03 June 2005 Posts: 5602 Location: Canada Country:
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I'm not a good person to judge poetry, but I read them all and finally I chose Narnia by Dreia. You all did a great job though 
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Post subject: Posted: November 28th, 2005, 8:01 pm |
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Joined: 03 June 2005 Posts: 2141 Location: Davenport, Iowa
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You fogot meeeee!!!!!
Was i too lateeeee????
*cries*
I needed tiiiiiimmmmeeee!!!!
And I'm already having a really bad day.....
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Post subject: Posted: November 29th, 2005, 1:37 am |
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Joined: 30 October 2005 Posts: 5188 Location: 'Dance like flame cuase theres no gravity, and now I am just a candle trying to stay lit... Country:
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aw elle im sorry! I can pause this for now...ill reopen the polls after you PM me your poem! terribly sorry...it wont let me close the poll...I feel so bad.  ;(
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