I adore Poetry as well.
I just started writing it on October 7, 06 (yes, Im a nerd-I know the exact date
) and I've written almost 150 Poems.
I get obsessed with writing it.
I mainly write it to reflect my feelings. and I've writen about 5 songs.
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| Author: | sw33t_vanya [ February 14th, 2007, 6:27 pm ] |
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Ok I personally LOVE poetry So if you have something to "contribute" SHOW ME!!! Cuz I wanna seee Yes i do! Here are some of my work: Starving to Obtain Nothing I don't see why my feelings are always tears Trying to hold back while fighting my fears Waking from nightmares every night and day But they won't leave me alone;they won't go away It's still all the same, the agony neverending No matter the amount, my heart still isn't used to the bending The feeling of happiness is no longer used My mind is to numb, too cold, and abused So suffocated by darkness it's impossible to get air But go outside myself to breathe is something I wouldn't dare Noone can tell my feelings behind the stone mask If anyone wonders, they certainly don't ask Craving something, starving myself to obtain it But really I don't know why I even give a *beep* Starving to obtain nothing; my time being spent Seeing the damage to my heart is much worse then a dent Hiding in the corners of my mind, striving to stay alive Sometimes it feels like my mind is stuck in DRIVE Life is to depressing why is it always like this? Your love is what I need.it's wat i crave. wat i miss Darkness helps me hide myself from everyone's judgmental eyes I strain to remember everything but I fail no matter how many tries Starving my self to obtain nothing is all I really do Dying to do something.anything to be with you Curling up holding myself tight trying not to cry Why can't everyone leave me alone. just let me die Nothing matters anymore if this is all that happens in life I need relief...the only think that helps anymore is a knife I do need help really I know I do But get help is definitely somthing I'm unable to do I need life breathed back into me Your face is what I desperately need to see Sorrowful thinking; endless frustration I can no longer tell if I'm waking up or dying I can't comprehend it, no matter how much I'm trying Dead inside; no external reason to live I have nothing else..nothing left to give So dead from everything; comforted by none This life is over. I give up. I'm done. Dying to Be perfect She feels so worthless, the models are so perfect in her eyes She knows everyone thinks she's ugly, the compliments are just lies Counting how many bites she eats, to make sure she gets it up later Knowing the thinner she gets, more guys will want to date her To all her friends she's perfect, that's how she wants to be But sadly no one knows, no one cares to even see She's dying to be perfect, becoming dangerously small Trying to be beautiful, while stumbling down the hall She doesn't have enough energy to even stand up right But still she has to make sure her clothes aren't too tight Wearing baggy clothes, hiding her skin and bones Friends keep calling wondering if she's ok, but she can't even reach for the phone All she wants to do is sleep, hoping to lose more Starving herself so much her insides are sore She tells herself it's for the best, food is the enemy, its bad Making sure she's freakishly thin, after all it's the latest fad People start to ask, she brushes them off telling them she's just suffering from the flu Really she knows she has a problem, she just doesn't know what to do She looks in the mirror, seeing how fat and ugly she is When really she's nearly dying by starving to be perfect Her mom starts to worry, asking questions to find out She gives a lame excuse, so her mom still doubts But she has to be perfect even though it kills her inside She covers her skin, hoping herself, she'll hide I hope someone helps her because she's coming close to death She curses the reflection in the mirror, with her last staggered breath If It was Right If it was the right thing to do then why do I feel this way Feeling guilty throughout every night and day If it was right then why can't I get you out of my mind I thought all the memories we shared were now behind You said you'd never move on, I'd still be your only one I worry those promises may unravel...come undone But why should I even care? I'm the one who made it end Of course as always my heart still won't bend I need to move on..I already have partly, sure I'm even unaware of anything I've made you endure If it was right why am I even writing this.. Completely unknowing...wondering if you even miss If it was right why am I still confused I'm sorry if I hurt you, your feelings misused I know you won't see this so why am I speaking? Maybe because slowly my heart is still leaking If it was right why don't I believe so? Maybe because for some odd unknown reason I can't quite let go |
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| Author: | The Nightingale [ February 18th, 2007, 8:39 am ] |
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I got lotsa poetry... most of it, though, I don't know if it'd be allowed on here - it's very strongly Christian. |
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| Author: | Guest [ February 18th, 2007, 10:40 pm ] |
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I adore Poetry as well. I just started writing it on October 7, 06 (yes, Im a nerd-I know the exact date ) and I've written almost 150 Poems.
I get obsessed with writing it. I mainly write it to reflect my feelings. and I've writen about 5 songs.
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| Author: | Porteuse de l'anneau [ February 20th, 2007, 5:30 pm ] |
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my fav is "Dying to Be perfect" !!! yep !! 
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| Author: | Ashwise [ March 2nd, 2007, 11:23 pm ] |
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I like poetry, but I have more fun writing it. It's a fun way to write about the world around you! |
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| Author: | Guest [ March 2nd, 2007, 11:33 pm ] |
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and its a nice way to let your feelings out on paper.. 
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| Author: | Fíriel_18190 [ March 3rd, 2007, 5:47 am ] |
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I like the Poem Starving to Obtain Nothing best of the three. I really like Poetry, but unfortunately I'm no good at writing Poetry. It's a good way let ur feelings out. |
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| Author: | Rhavaniel Falathiel [ March 3rd, 2007, 12:00 pm ] |
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You write really well ^^ What inspired you to write those poems? |
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| Author: | FRODOFAN [ August 17th, 2007, 1:53 pm ] |
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I have an account at allpoetry if you're interested. I write rhyme and meter. My username there is Frodofan also. But, for past poets, I would recommend Emily Dickinson, Edgar Allen Poet, John Masefield, Emily Bronte, Hartley Coleridge, Robert Frost, Dante Gabriel Rosetti, John Clare, and Christina Rosetti. As for modern poets, look up Michael Fantina if you can. |
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| Author: | Tsukiko [ August 22nd, 2007, 6:49 pm ] |
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FRODOFAN wrote: I have an account at allpoetry if you're interested. I write rhyme and meter. My username there is Frodofan also.
But, for past poets, I would recommend Emily Dickinson, Edgar Allen Poet, John Masefield, Emily Bronte, Hartley Coleridge, Robert Frost, Dante Gabriel Rosetti, John Clare, and Christina Rosetti. As for modern poets, look up Michael Fantina if you can. Once I knew these super-annoying people who said that poets like Edgar Allen and Robert Frost, weren't really good poets at all. They were some stupid stubborn idiots...  
haha...ah..sorry.
I write Poetry! but umm...I dont know if I am good at it. 
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| Author: | FRODOFAN [ August 22nd, 2007, 11:13 pm ] |
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I can't imagine anyone saying that. I'd like to know who they thought WERE good poets. |
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| Author: | Tsukiko [ August 22nd, 2007, 11:18 pm ] |
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I know. Thats what I was thinking. and they went around criticizing everyone else's poems so cruelly, even my own, that I thought maybe I wasnt any good at Poetry. they always thought that each poem they read was 'horrible' and 'unpoetic' |
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| Author: | Taurquende [ August 23rd, 2007, 1:22 am ] |
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^ I don't think there's any good or bad poetry, because all poetry expresses someone's deep and honest feelings and secret thoughts. That's something that you can't put a label on to me.
Regardless, I'm not showing any of you my poetry.
I love Starving for Nothing. I've felt the same way so many times... I also have a friend who would probably benefit from Dying to be Perfect. I might send it to her, if that's alright with you.
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| Author: | Tsukiko [ August 23rd, 2007, 3:19 pm ] |
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Taurquende wrote: ^ I don't think there's any good or bad poetry, because all poetry expresses someone's deep and honest feelings and secret thoughts. That's something that you can't put a label on to me.
Regardless, I'm not showing any of you my poetry. heh. thats almost exactly what I said to them. but then they said that those things dont matter, and you need to follow poetic devices and rules. aww!! you should share some. ^^ Im sure its great. |
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| Author: | Ashwise [ September 9th, 2007, 7:40 pm ] |
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I like writing angst and haikus. |
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| Author: | FRODOFAN [ September 9th, 2007, 8:01 pm ] |
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I've never gotten into haikus. But writing angst is theraputic. It's also good to channel that into other things though. I write poetry a lot and I think my writing has really matured now that I don't focus so much on myself, but channel my emotions into the characters I invent and also observe and try to capture the feelings of others. |
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