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 Post subject: A LotR Poem
PostPosted: April 26th, 2006, 8:43 am 


Well, I just edited this a little while ago. It is based on the Friendship between Frodo and Samwise. Enjoy!^^

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Burdens are lighter when carried by two.
I just want you to know I'm here for you.

Day by day and night by night,
I will stand and I shall fight.

I have vowed to help you to carry this burden,
Thus you will not bend beneath it's weight.

You look at me, and what I see in your eyes;
I see hope that never fails to fall from the skies.

The war has just begun, and more burdens befall upon you; making you weary with sorrow and despair.
Though, I step up and take more of the burden than my share.

You look at me and ask
"Why do of such when it only inflicts more pain upon you?"

I only smile and say
"Burdens are lighter when carried by two."

Burdens are lighter when carried by two.
I just want you to know I am here for you.

I shall pick you up when you fall
Ner' will I leave your side at all.

To the mountain we shall go
To destroy the one thing that is foe.

The war is still upon us
But we will not put up a fuss.

Our friends help us below
Smiting the deathly foe

I watched as you walked to the pathway of darkness
I watched as you held it within you hands.

"Mr. Frodo, let it go" Was all I said
"It's mine" was your reply.

You faught for your prized possesion,
Only then did you learn a true lesson.

Alas!
The war is over and we have won the fight together.

Together we have defeated the burdens forever.
You look at me again; so much joy is all I see in your eyes.

I smile and say unto you,
" Hope never fails to fall from the skies when there are two carrying a burden instead of one."

Brudens are lighter when carried by two.
I just wan't you to know, I am here for you.


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PostPosted: April 26th, 2006, 8:50 pm 
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This belongs in the Fanfiction/poetry area! *Nudge Nudge*

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I think you may have posted this on my forum. It is still wonderful. Love the line, "burdens are light when carried by two." :) Keep writing.

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That is sooooo beautiful, I love it. It seemed to hit something in me.

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That very good, it has a nice rhythm.

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