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PostPosted: August 1st, 2006, 3:32 pm 
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lol. I will!!! :-D

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Yes, I can't wait to read more. :)

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yes, i'm working on it........havent thought of anything though.....having been in a very big writing mood. idk y, but i will eventually!! :)

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OK, i wrote more! i was in a sudden writing mood, as iknew would happen eventually! lol i'm just gonna post the whole thing. tell me wut u guys
think!! :bye2: still not done w/ it though.......lol



On the outside
everything seemed fine.
Of all the pain and confusion,
I showed no sign.

Everyone believed the lie
that life was simple for me.
They didn’t even take the time
to look for themselves and see.

It was then that I met him.
He seemed to understand
all that confusion, and all that pain;
that my life was not so grand.

He was like an angel
That’d been sent from above.
He showed me compassion;
He showed me how to love.

Everything had been so dark,
Like the deepest depths of night.
But as soon as I met him,
I saw a glimpse of light.

I had always felt so cold;
So cold and so afraid.
But as soon as I met him,
I knew it would all be OK.

He taught me that life could be fun;
That it wasn’t all hurt and pain.
He taught me to be crazy;
To laugh, and dance in the rain.

And back when he was still here,
I made a promise to him.
I told him that I would never give up;
That I would fight, & not give in.

But even though that now he’s gone,
I still live in the light.
I haven’t gone back to my old ways,
Of living in the night.

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PostPosted: August 8th, 2006, 4:08 pm 
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Love the last part of it a lot! :) great job!

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PostPosted: August 8th, 2006, 4:23 pm 
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thanks :) I've written a little more, but i dont have it w/ me right now. i'll post it l8r, though!!! glad u like it!! :-D

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Alrigt. :) I'll be watching.

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OK, i THINK i've finished it............but i'm not 100% sure. so anyway, here it is, for now. tell me wut u think!! :-D



On the outside
everything seemed fine.
Of all the pain and confusion,
I showed no sign.

Everyone believed the lie
that life was simple for me.
They didn’t even take the time
to look for themselves and see.

It was then that I met him.
He seemed to understand
all that confusion, and all that pain;
that my life was not so grand.

He was like an angel
That’d been sent from above.
He showed me compassion;
He showed me how to love.

Everything had been so dark,
Like the deepest depths of night.
But as soon as I looked in his eyes,
I saw a glimpse of light.

I had always felt so cold;
So cold and so afraid.
But as soon as I met him,
I knew it would all be OK.

He taught me that life could be fun;
That it wasn’t all hurt and pain.
He taught me to be crazy;
To laugh, and dance in the rain.

And back when he was still here,
I made a promise to him.
I told him that I would never give up;
That I would fight, & not give in.

But even though that now he’s gone,
I still live in the light.
I haven’t gone back to my old ways,
Of living in the dark of night.

For I know that he is watching me,
And protecting me as well.
I know that he’s standing right next to God,
Being my guardian angel.

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I love it!! I think you did a great job with it. For some reason, it reminds me of the movie Titanic. :) Random thought. I love it though!!! :-D

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thanks arwen! u know, now taht u said that, it does me, 2. lol :-D idk, sumtimes i write poems, & i dont even know wut they're aobut until l8r!! maybe that's wut this was orginally about! lol :-D thanks again for the input!! :hug:

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Nice job, and I think that works excelently for the ending. :)

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^thanks Jax. :)

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