here's a poem i wrote partly based on hamlet and partly based on my own experiences:

To die...

Too much hurt for me to take –
Sometimes I fear that I may break.
Events conspire to cause me pain,
Ache my heart and pound my brain.
I long to die and be set free.
How wonderful to cease to be!
Violent thoughts spin round my head
But I cannot act with limbs of lead.
The weight of conscience weighs me down
For to this life I have been bound.
Dare I risk Almighty’s wrath
By straying from His chosen path?
I must choose twixt life and death –
Solid flesh or final breath –
But can I gamble eternal life
Just to ease my earthly strife?
I would my own quietus make
But there is just too much at stake.

what do you reckon?

Well.... I feel like kiling myself lotsa times....I tried the other day(in pool) really hard though

that's an awful thing to say and if that's how you feel, i'm praying for you. i was suicidal for several years, so i know what it feels like to be in that place, but i pulled through and now i've found incredible peace and joy in god - things can and do get better if you only HOLD ON. the whole point of the poem is that there's too much to lose by suicide - life is precious so hold on to it.

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Yea, the poem is really good..I really like it and i like writing poems myself actually