Yes, yes... making it up off the top of my head... as you can tell. But someimes I need to do such things. For those of you that know me, you'll know that this is about December Lanaen. ^^;
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Ice tears, and a whirl-wind of pain,
A torrent of snow that seems to lay upon my heart,
Fingertips turned to frost,
Nothing remains inside...
And a Dove to remind me of the Spring..

Unwanted child,
Declined lover,
What else is left to such ice?
The lakes freeze over for winter,
And my soul remains a tidal-wave of pain...
The Dove has died.

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Those who find ugly meanings, in beautiful things, are corrupt without being charming. This is a fault. -Oscar Wilde-

ooh, I like that, Seral. It's so sad. It's beautiful. keep it up!

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

Thank you, very much.. though it was just off the top of my head... I'll have to sit down one of these days and work one out, properly. ^_^;;

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Those who find ugly meanings, in beautiful things, are corrupt without being charming. This is a fault. -Oscar Wilde-

It's beautiful!!!! & yes, post more! i'd lvoe to read it!!

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

Ahh the coldness of Deci -pets and freeze-

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The waves that C R A S H E D upon
The R O C K S that you were trying to step along

And in my head I heard them play a S O N G

Thank you, Pip. ^_^ I shall post some more, as soon as I can. -nodnod-

-griiiiins, and pets the Pannie- Aww... he's nice really. -shifty eyes-

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Those who find ugly meanings, in beautiful things, are corrupt without being charming. This is a fault. -Oscar Wilde-

let me know when u do

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

w00t Seral, another testiment to your skill as a writer, I wish I could come up with something like that off the top of my head. I've written one poem, mostly off the top of my head, but other than that, nothing. [To see said poem, look back through the old posts in this section]

I will do, Pip. ^_^ Thankies, once again.

Nuuu, your poem rocked, Darrell. -le nodnod- Remember you asked me to read it before you put it up?
I enjoyed that one.. and I thought my one was a bit too short, and a bit too... lacking description.. >.>

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Those who find ugly meanings, in beautiful things, are corrupt without being charming. This is a fault. -Oscar Wilde-

Seral--I Really loved your Poem, we can think what we want from it, because there's no big description....I like theese kind of poems:)

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On and on, does anybody know what we are living for? Whatever happens, we leave it all to chance...

THE SHOW MUST GO ON!

its kool!!

^I agree w/ all!!

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

Aw, thanks guys... -throws confetti- I usually prefer writing with more description, but you're right; sometimes when its left to the imagination, and its just emotions that are expressed, it can be easier to identify with. ^^;;

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Those who find ugly meanings, in beautiful things, are corrupt without being charming. This is a fault. -Oscar Wilde-