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| Author: | Guest [ July 29th, 2006, 2:37 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Dont Go (A Narnian Poem) |
Don't Go By: *Estel* You walk to your Death with a stern face and pride, I watch in the Sahdows as I quietly Cry I look at your face, it looks nither sad or glad. You look sort of troubled, as you walk slowly though this land Your Proud head drooped, sunken low to the earth, makes me Cry at the sight As you stop and look up, with monster's so near, I hide behind the bushes to watch in Fear With a sreaming laugh and a knife in hand, the One who will kill you, is drawing near at hand. "Why doesn't he fight back?" I whisper to myself as they bound you and taunt you with shrieks and laughs. The Knife raises's above you, and with a joyous laugh, the Knife falls and smotes you. I whisper "Don't Go... No! Dont kill him please!" Its too late now there is nothing to be done, as the monsters scatter, and flee through the Wood. With sobs and tears, I walk near you, to see your face, as I never knew |
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| Author: | Dea [ July 29th, 2006, 4:06 pm ] |
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I like it...it took you how much time to write it? |
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| Author: | Guest [ July 29th, 2006, 5:16 pm ] |
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not that long alsmot 5 mins. and thanks for the compliment!! |
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| Author: | Guest [ August 3rd, 2006, 9:25 pm ] |
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ah..no1 liked my poem? |
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| Author: | lady_E [ August 4th, 2006, 2:59 am ] |
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i love it, very inspireing |
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| Author: | Guest [ August 7th, 2006, 11:16 pm ] |
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i might post me narnia story..on here its called "Where's Lucy!?" |
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