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PostPosted: August 2nd, 2006, 9:50 am 
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This is supposed to be about the breaking of the Fellowship.

When your burden grows too great to bear
When your comforter is gone
When your only friends are separated
That is being alone.

When beloved companions sacrifice all
And fellowship becomes broken
Remember them and what they’ve done
And that will be your everlasting token.

When day turns into blackest night
And joy turns into sorrow
Fear not, for sorrow lasts a day
And comfort will come tomorrow.

When brave companions, loyal and true
Become memories or the past,
Life is still there to be traveled through,
And there will be peace at last.
I’ll meet you down the road one day,

In the bower just ‘round the bend.
Where we will be together
And the day will never end…

Though old friends have departed,
And the path seems long and rough,
Be strong and take courage,
Even though you may not be tough.

For the road has many bends
And the hill seems not to have a crest
There are valleys and deep rivers
But in the end there will be rest.


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PostPosted: August 2nd, 2006, 9:58 am 
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That was great! Good work! :-D

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Thanks! It's my first LOTR poem.


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I luv it!! :) keep it up! great job. It flowed good, & there was good rhyming........it didn't sound forced or anything which is good. (& hard 2 do, I might add. ;))

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PostPosted: August 9th, 2006, 8:02 pm 
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Thanks again. Here's more!

There are wounds that time will never heal
There are times when your presence seems too real.
Sometimes I see you when you aren’t there
Is there anyone here that loves or cares?

Time can never replace you, my dearest friend,
The day you went away from me
The world seemed to shatter and end.
Your voice seems ever to haunt me
But your death is hard to bear.
Sometimes I feel your hand in mine
But I know that you aren’t there.

Your love and comfort uplifted me
And your voice has been my guide.
But know you aren’t there for me
Because you’ve left me; you have died!

My heart seemed to melt away in me
You died so I could get away.
But now life isn’t life anymore
Now sorrow fills my day.

When I have pain it fills my heart
When there’s no pain it’s complete emptiness.
My sun has set the clouds are rolling in
I am pierced by an invisible dart.

But some bright day I know
I will see you some day.
We will laugh again together
And have joy that never before I could know.

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