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Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ August 4th, 2006, 5:31 pm ] |
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OK, for those of u who have seen or read A walk to remember (AWTR) & prob. balled through it (@ least I did) here's a little poem I wrote. It's in Landon's POV. hope u like it! criticism & opinions is asked for, as always! hope u like it!! ![]() I had never shown her any attention. I had never looked her way. But by the time I realized I was in love, I knew that it was too late. Everything about her was perfect. She was everybody’s friend. I will never forget the day I found out, That her life was soon to end. All the darkness had finally lifted, The day her hand touched mine. But now it seemed to all be coming back. Things were slowly starting to decline. I remember going home that day, And crying all night long. I felt like my heart had been ripped out; Everything was going so wrong. I had dreamed of the day that I would meet, The one that was perfect for me. But now that I finally had, She was being ripped away from me. A couple days afterwards; After she’d told me of her news, She came, stood on my doorstep, looked me in the eye, And said those blessed words, “I love you.” I knew I didn’t have long with her, So I got straight to work. I made all her wildest dreams come true, And did my best to hide all my hurt. And then I did something that I Never thought would come to be. I got on my knee, and asked my love, If she would marry me. And so it was, We became husband and wife. We made our promise, To be together, for life. It was a beautiful day; Everything went great. Everything was fine, Until in, crept fate. We hadn’t been married long, When suddenly one day, My angel fainted, And was taken away. Her long beautiful hair, And her sweet tender head, Now rested on a pillow, In a hospital bed. Every day and night, On that bed she lay. And slowly, to my horror, I watched her fade away. I think about her everyday, And dream of her each night. But I know that she is heaven, And I know that she’s alright. For now that she is gone, Her love is like the wind. I can’t see it, But I’ll always be able to feel it. |
Author: | Meltithenniel [ August 7th, 2006, 7:34 am ] |
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Awww, pip! That is such a sweet poem, it made me cry! I love AWtR... i cry every time i see it. Your poem was excellent! It was filled with all types of emotion... sorrow, fear... and the best part about it was that you actually conveyed those feelings to the reader. You made me empathetic with Landon's feelings. Great job. ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ August 7th, 2006, 12:04 pm ] |
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aw, thanks Mel. yes, i cry through that movie every time. lol ![]() ![]() |
Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ August 10th, 2006, 5:50 pm ] |
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You made me cry, too!! That's so sad, but so well written. I love AWTR too. I think this is one of my favorites of yours. ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ August 11th, 2006, 4:16 pm ] |
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Aw, thanks Mommy! lol ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Author: | Jax Nova [ August 11th, 2006, 6:08 pm ] |
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very nice. ![]() ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ August 11th, 2006, 8:48 pm ] |
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u should see it Jax!! or read the book. do u like luv storie? lol b/c if u dont, u might not like it........but i'm not a big fan of them myself, & i luvd it. Although i cried through the whole thing..........lol:-P |
Author: | Jax Nova [ August 19th, 2006, 6:22 pm ] |
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well, I am not really into romance no. lol but who knows maybe some day I will watch it. But I don't watch much tv of any kind really. lol |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ August 19th, 2006, 10:51 pm ] |
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i watch a lot less than i used 2......but i'm a sucker 4 movies. I LOVE movies!! lol ![]() |
Author: | Jax Nova [ August 21st, 2006, 5:38 pm ] |
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lol I love movies as well... it's just hard for me to find the right kind. lol |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ August 21st, 2006, 8:22 pm ] |
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lol. I understand that. Idk wut it is w/ me & movies.......i just get so.....idk, "in the zone." lol ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ August 22nd, 2006, 6:38 pm ] |
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I'm the same with movies. I just get soooo wrapped up in them, as if I become a part of them for awhile. I know the feeling well, Pip. ![]() ![]() I know what you mean about finding the right kind of movie, Jax. I mostly just like action kind of stuff, or books made into movies. (Like LotR, of course ![]() ![]() I could NEVER be an actress- I'm waaaaaay to shy. I want to be a journalist. ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ August 22nd, 2006, 8:44 pm ] |
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idk y i put Elegost.......Elegost is the name of guy in a video game i play. lol The book is actually Eragon. (2 many E names....lol) & It's by Christopher Paolini. reconize it now that i ahve the right name?? lol ![]() Oh, I could never be an actress, either. I'm also 2 shy. (although i'm working on that.) Just 1 of those dreams that'll never cum2 be, but r still fun 2 dream about. lol ![]() A journalist? that's cool. ![]() ![]() |
Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ August 22nd, 2006, 9:17 pm ] |
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Oh, now I know why Elegost sounds familiar- he's a member on the forum. ![]() ![]() I love to play the piano too, but I'll never be good enough to actually play for a job or anything. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ August 22nd, 2006, 9:21 pm ] |
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yea, Elegost is in an LotR video game, so that's who the guy on this forum is named after. lol ![]() Yea, i think if it was my job, it wouldnt be so fun ne more though, so i prob. wont play 4 a living. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ August 23rd, 2006, 12:06 am ] |
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I don't play a whole lot of video games, (even LotR, and that's saying something ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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