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Author: | pirateoftherings [ August 13th, 2006, 5:34 pm ] |
Post subject: | For You, I Will (PotC Poem) |
Rating: G Summary: CotBP. A short poem (concerning Elizabeth) written from Norrington's perspective. I've had it written for a while, but I never got around to posting it. ------------------------------- For you, I will lose my composure. For you, I won’t know what to say. For you, I will face my most terrible fears. For you, I have lived ‘til this day. For you, I will risk my own safety. For you, I will put forth all haste. For you, I will disregard all laws and orders. For you, it will not be a waste. For you, I will sail o’er the ocean. For you, I will search through the night. For you, I will go without sleep or nutrition. For you, I will tirelessly fight. For you, I will see my own failure. For you, I will right what is wrong. For you, I will give the one thing I desire. For you, I will evermore long. For you, I will learn to let go. |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ August 14th, 2006, 10:30 am ] |
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aw, that's so sweet!! ![]() ![]() |
Author: | Aramel Elyanwe [ August 18th, 2006, 9:13 pm ] |
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Wow, that was awesome POTR! ![]() |
Author: | Lady Dark Moon [ August 24th, 2006, 6:44 pm ] |
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I love the repetition and how you stressed the last line. I think most of the poem had a wistful/hopeful/longing air to it, but at the very end you tinged it with a bit of sorrow. very nice! ![]() |
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