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Post subject: The Grey Havens Posted: August 15th, 2006, 11:19 am |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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The Grey Havens
(From Frodo's POV)
I turn to you,
and look you in the eye.
I take a deep breath,
and try not to cry.
“We set out to save the Shire, Sam,
hoping that something better would come to be.
And it has been saved, my friend,
but not for me.
I tell him my time here is over;
It’s done; It’s at an end.
I tell him I know that it is hard,
but I know that we’ll meet again.
And so we hug, one last time,
and as tears fall from our eyes,
We cry together, one last time,
and say our final good byes.
And then I give to him, the book,
that Bilbo and I wrote.
I tell him the last pages are for him,
And then I turn, and climb onto the boat.
One last time, I look over my shoulder,
and smile at my friends.
The long journey, that together we took,
has finally come to end.
And then I turn away from them,
and we set sail, to leave forevermore.
And as I turn, I see a glimpse,
of silver glass, and white shores.
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Post subject: Posted: August 15th, 2006, 11:27 am |
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That is soooo sad!!! I love it though- you made me get tears in my eyes. Even though that scene is so sad, it is also one of my favorites, and you captured the emotion perfectly. I love it!! (Honestly, you get better and better with your poetry all the time.  )
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Post subject: Posted: August 15th, 2006, 11:39 am |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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^ aw thanks, Arwen!:hug: I do feel like i'm getting better. *shrugs* hey, u write, don't u? u haent posted any poems in a while.......... 
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Post subject: Posted: August 15th, 2006, 3:48 pm |
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Joined: 30 December 2005 Posts: 2901
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Anytime, daughter.  I know... I just haven't had time to keep up lately!! I'll try to post some new ones soon. Mostly I'm just working on that story that I'm writing, and it's still not ready to post yet. 
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Post subject: Posted: August 15th, 2006, 4:22 pm |
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Wow, that poem is awesome. You managed to get it to rhyme without the rhyming seeming forced. And that is some achievement. And you managed to capture the soul of the moment too, both from the movie and the book. *appluades loudly* I like that poem a lot *wishes he could write like that*
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Post subject: Posted: August 15th, 2006, 7:42 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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yea, well let me know when it's ready 2 post, arwen!! b/c i wanna read it!! lol
Aw, thankis, Darrell!!! I wrote this poem @ the dinner table like week ago. lol it jsut kinda came to me. idk y. Hey, & if u like poetry, if u havent tried writing it, try anyway!! Jax tried 2 get me 2 write forever & then i finally did & ended up really enjoying it!!!  so go for it!! & thanks so much for the input u guys!! i really do appreciate it!! *hugs* 
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Post subject: Posted: August 17th, 2006, 5:17 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Very nice! That provoked a emotion, and that is something that poems don't usually do unless they have a specific relation to past events in my life that are emotional trials. lol It was very nicely done and very much portrayed the scene in the movie.  *thumbs up* *grins*
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Post subject: Posted: August 17th, 2006, 6:03 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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^aw! thanks Jax!! 8)
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Post subject: Posted: August 18th, 2006, 1:40 am |
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Joined: 03 July 2006 Posts: 1743
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That was awesome! I loved it. 
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Post subject: Posted: August 18th, 2006, 1:03 pm |
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Joined: 14 July 2006 Posts: 2652 Location: Rivendell, of course
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Wow, that's really beautiful!  It almost made me cry...
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Post subject: Posted: August 18th, 2006, 4:00 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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thanks gollum!! did it?? lol sry, rose!!! 
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Post subject: Posted: August 19th, 2006, 6:09 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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I think that would be a good think. *grins*
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Post subject: Posted: August 19th, 2006, 10:58 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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^lol  yea, i guess 
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