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Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ August 25th, 2006, 6:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Falling In Love

This is kind of an odd poem....not really sure where it came from....but here it is anyway. let me know wut u think!!! :-D



She first met him on a dark day.
A day filled with darkness, and sorrow;
Filled with shades of gray.
Filled with thoughts of evil,
And shadows.
A day filled with rain clouds & storms.
A day filled with rain and hail, snow and lightning,
Pain and suffering, tears and sorrow.


Yet suddenly, the mist seemed to clear,
The clouds, to part.
The fear, to lessen.
And that was when, she saw him.
Kind and happy, sweet and beautiful.
Perfect in every way.
The sun seemed to shine, and the birds to sing.
Shadow and evil, no longer stirred in her heart.


Everyday after,
Darkness still lingered,
Yet it seemed not to matter.
For everyday, she knew he would be there,
And what little darkness that was there,
Would be gone,
The moment that she laid eyes on him.
Everything seemed to be finally turning around.




But evil does not give up so easily.





It returned, now stronger than ever,
Making her think she was nothing.
Worth nothing, felt nothing, saw nothing, had nothing,
Was nothing.
Made here think, she wasn’t good enough for him.
Made her think, that he would never love a girl like her.


So she made a promise to herself,
That she couldn’t let him know.
Under no circumstances, could she let him know.
She couldn’t let him know, how she felt.
How every time he glanced her way, her heart melted.
How every time he laughed, she felt like she was soaring.
How every time he cried, her heart cried with him.
How every time he talked to her, she was afraid.
Afraid, that she was falling, falling,
In love.


For if she fell in love with him, and he with her,
He would gain nothing.
For she wasn’t worth anything;
For she was nothing.


Everyday, she lived in fear.
Fear of him,
And fear of herself;
Fear of darkness and shadows.


So one day, in a desperate attempt,
To end her pain,
And take away any he may ever have encountered, had he fallen,
She pulled out a dagger, and raised it before he heart.
She was ready to end it,
Ready for it to stop;
Ready to plunge it into her heart, and be lost,
Forever.


She was so close.
So close, to it ending,
When suddenly, she heard a desperate cry….


NO!!



It echoed through the night,
And stopped her plunge,
If only for a moment.
She turned to look,
And there he stood.
He rushed forward, taking the dagger from her hand….
And she let him.


I cannot let thee kill thyself, he said.
For if it were to be so, I would have to, in turn,
Kill myself, as well.
For I could not live, without your face,
Without your smile,
Without you tears;
Without You.


For you see, evil haunted me.
Darkness surrounded me.
Shadows engulfed me,
Until I met you.
You are my light in darkness,
My hope in fear,
My angel;
My love.
Without you, I would surely perish.



And as he finished, tears leaked from her eyes.
He shook his head in confusion.
Why have I upset thee?
I don’t understand.
But she smiled, and lifted her hand to his face.
My love, she whispered.
My precious, precious love.
I cry not tears of sorrow, but tears of joy.
For in darkness, I too walked.
But now, I have found the light, in your eyes.
You are my light, my hope, my refuge;
My love.
I loveth thee,
And ye loveth me.
And I have found hope in this crazy world, for the first time in my life.


Ye loveth me back?
He asked, quietly.
And she nodded, a smile on her face, and a light in her eyes.
And he leaned forward, and kissed her lightly.
He didn’t want to go to far;
Didn’t want to scare her.
But she was no longer afraid.
As he leaned back, she stopped him, her hand on his face.
Don’t Stop, she whispered.
Don’t ever stop.



And all the darkness was lifted,
And light filled their lives.
And they lived, and died, and were,
Together.
For she loveth him
And he loveth her.
For evil does not give up easily,
But love,
Never does.

Author:  Jax Nova [ August 29th, 2006, 2:59 pm ]
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Loved it! I liked very much how you put them both in the egsact situation and how they thought the same thing about the other one.. if that made any sense. lol but a very nicely writen poem. :)

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ August 29th, 2006, 4:09 pm ]
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yes, that does make sense, & thanks Jax!!! :-D

Author:  ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ September 4th, 2006, 4:57 pm ]
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I love it, Pip!! I read it in the Poetry contest thing, I meant to comment on it to you- but I love it!! :)

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ September 5th, 2006, 9:09 pm ]
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aw, thanks arwen!! :hug:

Author:  ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ September 5th, 2006, 11:14 pm ]
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Sure. :hug: Oh, and always let me know if I don't comment on something you've written- I'll try to keep up, but I want to make sure I don't miss anything!! :)

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ September 6th, 2006, 5:02 pm ]
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OK! If u really want me 2! lol :-P Actually, i just posted a new 1, titled Free. so, yea, read it if u want. lol & let me know if u ever write any!!! :-D

Author:  ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ September 6th, 2006, 5:53 pm ]
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I will. :) And I'll go check yours out. :)

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ September 7th, 2006, 7:16 pm ]
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:-D

Author:  Ashwise [ September 10th, 2006, 2:50 pm ]
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Beautiful poem! It sounds like Romeo and Juliet.

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ September 10th, 2006, 2:56 pm ]
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thanks! Except, they dont actually die. lol :-P

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