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PostPosted: October 7th, 2006, 5:34 pm 
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OK, so i wrote the 1st 3 stanzas like 4ever ago, & just happened to find it.....so yha, here it is....It's a little choppy, but get over it! lol jk :-P But, as usual, just let me know wut yha think! thanks!! :-D



The world is corrupt;
Filled with darkness and pain.
It’s once white pages,
Are now dark, with evil stain.

People kill people;
Friends kill friends.
And we sit here and wonder,
Is it worth it, in the end?

Is it worth all the fighting,
And lying each day?
Worth all the anger and cursing;
All the foul things that we say?

Is it worth all the sorrow
That we each day endure?
Worth all the tears and all the anguish;
All the pain, and all the torture?

Darkness follows us everywhere,
And when we think, we’ve finally gotten away,
It pops up, when we least expect it;
It’s here, and it’s here to stay.

So how can we beat this evil,
When it never leaves us alone?
What could possibly be stronger than it is;
I used to think it was unknown.

I used to think no thing existed,
That could end this ever enduring flame.
But I have since been proven wrong,
And for not believing before, I am ashamed.

For one day when darkness was surrounding,
And taking a hold of me,
I suddenly saw a glimpse of light,
That only I alone could see.

And all of a sudden,
I was no longer afraid.
My sorrow began to lessen;
My anger, to fade.




The world is corrupt;
Filled with darkness and pain.
It’s once white pages,
Are now dark, with evil stain.

People kill people;
Friends kill friends.
And we sit here and wonder,
Is it worth it, in the end?

Is it worth all the fighting,
And lying each day?
Worth all the anger and cursing;
All the foul things that we say?

Is it worth all the sorrow
That we each day endure?
Worth all the tears and all the anguish;
All the pain, and all the torture?

Darkness follows us everywhere,
And when we think, we’ve finally gotten away,
It pops up, when we least expect it;
It’s here, and it’s here to stay.

So how can we beat this evil,
When it never leaves us alone?
What could possibly be stronger than it is;
I used to think it was unknown.

But I now I know the one and only thing,
that can beat this darkness away.
And that is the love, of my Lord Jesus;
He’s the reason I’m living today.

But he does not use weapons,
Such a guns or swords, like the rest.
Instead, he uses his love for us;
A weapon the devil, simply does not possess.

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Last edited by pip&leggyluvr on October 8th, 2006, 8:32 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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PostPosted: October 7th, 2006, 5:41 pm 
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This is a great poem, pip&leggylovr! So saddening, but true! You've done a great job!

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thx Erana!! :) Like I said, totally random, just came to me. lol :-P

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Awesom! The same goes for me too, if I write anything! lol

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Awasome job pip. And as the previous post all too true! lol

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PostPosted: October 7th, 2006, 5:51 pm 
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Lady Erana wrote:
Awesom! The same goes for me too, if I write anything! lol


yup!! lol :-P

& thx, Jax. :-D

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