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Author:  Lady Erana [ September 17th, 2006, 5:33 am ]
Post subject:  A love poem
I just had the feeling to write a poem about a specific person in my life, and... here it is: Please tell me what you think of it!

I have known you

I have known you
For nearly my entire life.
I have known you
We were friends.
We comforted each other,
We liked each other,
We loved each other.

I have known you
For nearly my entire life.
I have known you
As no one else has.
We were a team,
We were best friends,
We were in love.

I have known you
For nearly my entire life.
I have known you
But you turned away.
You left me,
You ignored me,
You hated me.

I have known you
For nearly my entire life.
Even when you didn’t talk,
Even when you didn’t care,
Even when you didn’t love.
And now… You’re gone.
Author:  Estë Undómë [ September 17th, 2006, 8:56 am ]
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This is great Erana! Good work.
Author:  Lady Erana [ September 17th, 2006, 9:40 am ]
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Thank you, EU! I put all my heart into that poem! :P
Author:  Estë Undómë [ September 17th, 2006, 10:14 am ]
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No probs, it's a good poem.
Author:  Lady Erana [ September 17th, 2006, 10:33 am ]
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I just wrote all my thoughts and this came out... somehow funny, I expected it would be rubbish...
Author:  Guest [ September 29th, 2006, 5:23 pm ]
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awwww...Erana! thats sad :hugs:

it was great though :)
Author:  Lady Erana [ September 30th, 2006, 6:03 am ]
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Thanks, TN! I put my heart into it!
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ October 6th, 2006, 5:30 pm ]
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I luv it!! It's so sad & so beautifully written!! I luv it! U can tell u put ur heart into it.....keep it up!! :)
Author:  Lady Erana [ October 7th, 2006, 4:11 pm ]
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Thank you so much, pip&leggylovr! :)
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ October 7th, 2006, 4:42 pm ]
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sure thing! Let me know if u write more!! :-D :bounce:
Author:  Lady Erana [ October 7th, 2006, 4:44 pm ]
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I will! I'm just working on one again... :bounce:
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ October 7th, 2006, 4:51 pm ]
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awesomeness! let me know when done!! lol :-P
Author:  Lady Erana [ October 7th, 2006, 5:21 pm ]
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^ It's done, I just posted it. The poem's called "A Dream"...
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ October 7th, 2006, 5:28 pm ]
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cool beans!! *goes off to read....*
Author:  Lady Erana [ October 7th, 2006, 5:31 pm ]
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Great! :) Well, not sure if it is that good...
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ October 7th, 2006, 5:36 pm ]
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w/e! i luvd it! I posted on there, so yha....read it!! lol :-D
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