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Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ September 19th, 2006, 8:53 pm ] |
Post subject: | Sepulchre's crown: a poem |
Forth lept Jerusalem's King Noble and proud 'top tall steed Sword glimmering and helm tall Cross ashine on proud chest Lord's might none contests His banners o'er desert lands Gold cross on blue The symbol of knights proud and true Sepulchre's crown now lies in dust Valiant sword lost to rust Kingdom lain to all but waste Great King Baldwin interred with haste |
Author: | Dunadariel [ September 20th, 2006, 10:09 pm ] |
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Very... powerful. The scheme is pretty free, and it works really well!!! Nice poem!!! It sent shivers up my spine when I read it, and I actually had to read it twice!!! My compliments! |
Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ September 20th, 2006, 10:10 pm ] |
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Thank you, I enjoy writing poems like these about historical subjects. |
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