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Author: | Dunadariel [ September 20th, 2006, 10:06 pm ] |
Post subject: | Elven Light |
Ooookay... First poem of mine!!! ![]() ![]() Elven Light A vial crystal shining bright Even through the darkest night A promise filled with perfect might A gift of sovereigns: Elven Light Was it mean and menial The gift that from Galadriel Bestowed on Frodo meaning well Would lead him through the darkness fell? The light bestowed from Earendil The vial crystal it did fill The light no evil dark can kill And no hardship can make it nil Sing now, to that lovely star That shines on us from afar That no evildoer can ever mar That led the Ring and Frodo far By Dunadariel Lone adn Wandering |
Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ September 20th, 2006, 10:09 pm ] |
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Quite good actually, you have the ability to consistently rhyme, unlike me. |
Author: | Dunadariel [ September 22nd, 2006, 6:59 pm ] |
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Haha!! Thank you very much. |
Author: | Zamorak_Flame [ October 11th, 2006, 9:50 pm ] |
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That was gorgeous. It flowed really nicely ![]() |
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