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Author:  Guest [ September 21st, 2006, 5:40 pm ]
Post subject:  One Last Step

<center>Get up now, get to the end
Dont give up now, your almost there
If you stumble and fall,
with your face in the earth,
Ill be the one, who will come and help you up

Your almost there, almost to the end
Just a few more steps, and your there.
Ignore the teasing,
Ignore the taunting
Keep your eyes steadily straight,
and You'll make it

See, your almost there
You did it in the end
Three more steps...and your there

Just one more step...
you can do it..
but that last step,
never happened...</center>

Author:  Lady Erana [ September 22nd, 2006, 6:31 am ]
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That's a beautiful poem, Nienor, beautiful and sad!

Author:  Guest [ September 22nd, 2006, 5:50 pm ]
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thank-you, Erana :)

I reckon most ppl wont read it

Author:  Aranel Fae [ September 23rd, 2006, 12:52 am ]
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Aw, it's so beautiful...and sad like Erana said. It's really good!

Author:  Guest [ September 23rd, 2006, 4:11 pm ]
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thanks Aranel :)

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ September 23rd, 2006, 6:08 pm ]
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aw, that's really sad & depressing.........but good, though. I like it! :-D

Author:  Guest [ September 23rd, 2006, 10:12 pm ]
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thank u :)

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