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Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ September 23rd, 2006, 6:13 pm ] |
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I wrote this in like 2 mins......jsut some random feelings i had to get out.......So anyway, it's not the greatest. Just let me know wut u think anyways!! ![]() ![]() Confused I look at you, and our eyes meet. And I smile. I can’t help it. And to my joy, you smile back. My heart begins to rush; My head, to spin. Every time I talk to you; Every time I smile at you; Every time I even look at you, I feel like I’ve gone through a storm; Like everything is a blur… And once we’re separated; Once we’re apart, Suddenly, everything is clear, again. I can think straight, again. But as soon as I see you, again, It just happens all over. Heart beating, Head rushing; Everything is a blur. How it is that you do this to me, I don’t know. How do you do this, to me? My friend, I can see. My cousin, I can understand. But me? I lose my mind over No one. No one, that is, Until I met you. I feel like I’m drowning. I want to spend Every moment, of everyday, With you. But as soon As you Come near, I run away. My heart is rushing, My head is spinning; I don’t understand. How? Why? How do you do this? Why, do you do it, to me? Do you mean to? Are you secretly laughing? Secretly thinking how stupid I am, to actually believe, that you might like me? Or are you genuine? Are you being true? Do you have any idea Who I am? I know you know me; I’ve talked to you before. But do you know me? I want you to know me. And yet, I don’t. Life is so confusing; It makes no sense. My heart is rushing, My head is spinning; And I am so confused. Does all love feel this way? I think this is love… Is this love? Or is this me, Being stupid? Is this me, thinking that you Might actually be the one? It makes no sense. I try to forget; Try to say that I’m not in love. But who am I kidding? Not me. No, I’m not kidding my heart. My heart knows; It knows what I really Feel. Love. Is it love? I don’t know. I don’t know what to think, anymore. My heart is rushing, My head is spinning; And I am so Confused. |
Author: | Jax Nova [ September 26th, 2006, 3:26 pm ] |
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Wow... that sure describes the emotion I would imagin in such a situation! IO never personaly been in such a situation really but that is always how I imagined it would be. Very nicely done. ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ September 28th, 2006, 4:03 pm ] |
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thanks, Jax. & i hadn't been until this summer over 1 guy, & now, over another. lol So basically, I'm new to this whole thing. lol ![]() ![]() ~Pip |
Author: | Jax Nova [ September 30th, 2006, 11:22 am ] |
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lol Yeah, the whole things soudns pretty complicated with all that kind of stuff. |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ September 30th, 2006, 8:46 pm ] |
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*hits head on wall* u have no idea. lol ![]() |
Author: | Jax Nova [ October 2nd, 2006, 3:25 pm ] |
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*sighs* lol Sometimes I just wish things were a little more clear. |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ October 2nd, 2006, 5:18 pm ] |
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*nods* Me too. It's like, OK God, I'm trusting you.....I know u'll lead me in the right direction.......but cant u just cum down & be like DO THIS!!! lol it would be SO much easier!! lol ![]() |
Author: | DiamondAngel [ October 2nd, 2006, 6:58 pm ] |
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The poem was really pretty! I cried lol. You know who this is. I didn't know thats what you felt like. lus ya!! |
Author: | Jax Nova [ October 3rd, 2006, 1:48 pm ] |
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pip&leggyluvr wrote: *nods* Me too. It's like, OK God, I'm trusting you.....I know u'll lead me in the right direction.......but cant u just cum down & be like DO THIS!!! lol it would be SO much easier!! lol
![]() LOL no kidding! |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ October 3rd, 2006, 4:12 pm ] |
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lol. ![]() |
Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ October 6th, 2006, 7:54 pm ] |
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Very good, Pip!! I liked the way it described the situation so well. ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ October 7th, 2006, 4:36 pm ] |
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thx Arwen ![]() |
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