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Calm - - - by Haldir o Lórien
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Author:  Aredhel Ar-Feiniel [ September 27th, 2006, 7:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Calm - - - by Haldir o Lórien
I did this for an in-class assignment ... it sounds a bit pathetic.

Calm
I am calm
Not the irate bully on the schoolyard
terrorizing children for power
Not calm enough to lie on a beach oblivious
to the world around me
Not calm enough to watch someone fall
without moving a finger
But just wander through a forest on a cool fall evening
with the colourful leaves blowing lightly about your figure
Calm like a little river on a warm
summer day
Calm like the long thin blades of green grass
tilting from the light subtle breeze
I let myself be swept away by the carefree
bliss of my calm and jovial game of a life.

- - - Haldir o Lórien
Author:  Aranel Fae [ September 28th, 2006, 10:13 am ]
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It's beautiful Haldir! Don't doubt your work. :P
Author:  Aramel Elyanwe [ October 1st, 2006, 4:20 pm ]
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I LOVE it, Haldir! :-D Although it doesn't discribe me - :boing:
Author:  Luthien of Lorien [ October 2nd, 2006, 1:33 am ]
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Very good Ducky! Let out your inner poet... :D The imagery is excellent, I truly enjoyed it!
Author:  Jax Nova [ October 2nd, 2006, 3:23 pm ]
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Very nice. :)

Has lovely imagry.
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