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Author:  Captain Jack [ September 29th, 2006, 1:11 pm ]
Post subject:  Two new poems

Seasons
Green leaves slowly changing
Gold leaves solomnly waving
Red leaves fluttering upon the air
Dead leaves laying upon the ground
Naked trees standing sentinel
Skeletal arms clad in glittering white
Melting snow, muddy Ground
Rotting leaves long fallen down
Small green buds and flowers new
Glietening in sunlight like beads of dew
Open flowers, long green leaves
Insects crying their sorrowful song
Love and loss and tears and joy
Unfolding anew as the sun rises

and here's the second one

Halloween
Dark sky
Cold night
Chill wind through skeletal trees
Candel burning behind a carved face
Trick or treat? Hide and seek?
Who's the monster behind the mask?
Old house on a high hill
The door a gaping mouth
Each dark window a heartless eye
Wood groaning
Shutters slamming
Tonight is the night we let the spirits out

tell me what you think. ^_^

Author:  Aramel Elyanwe [ October 1st, 2006, 3:49 pm ]
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These are really good! I like the Halloween one because Halloween is my fav. holiday! :-D

Author:  Guest [ October 1st, 2006, 3:56 pm ]
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I love those!! Your good at poetry Capt.Jack :)

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