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Does anyone Care? {A Poem}
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Author:  Guest [ September 29th, 2006, 10:51 pm ]
Post subject:  Does anyone Care? {A Poem}
Does anyone care
what I think?
What I do?
What I say
I feel like no
one does care,
and that I am not loved
at all.

Do you care at all?
Does anyone even
aknowledge my
presence?
No.
No one does.
No cares,
and no one
ever will...

its short. I know. Not all poems have to be long...
Author:  Guest [ September 30th, 2006, 8:40 pm ]
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No comments??? hhhm...

for shame..:speech:
Author:  Guest [ October 5th, 2006, 7:36 pm ]
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NO ONE HAS EVEN BOTHRED TO READ IT???

*cries sooo hard*
Author:  Jax Nova [ October 6th, 2006, 5:09 pm ]
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Hey, lol *reads it*

A nice poem but a very sad one. And I agree, not all poems have to be long. It is my personal prefrance when reading poetry to have shorter poems.
Author:  Anduril Vanlhach [ October 6th, 2006, 5:18 pm ]
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i agree with jax, its very good, how did you feel when you wrote it, what inspired you to write it, how did you feel after you'd written it?
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ October 6th, 2006, 5:23 pm ]
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yes, not all poems have to be long......& it is very sad. I think we all feel this way at one point or another....I really like it. Keep it up! :)
Author:  Guest [ October 6th, 2006, 5:52 pm ]
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YAY!! some1 read my poem after it has been up for weeks!!
Author:  Ashwise [ October 9th, 2006, 9:31 am ]
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Good poem... I think a lot of us can relate to it :)
Author:  Ms.Gamgee [ October 16th, 2006, 6:32 pm ]
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It's short, to the point, very relatiable to a lot if not most and all people. Good job!
Author:  Guest [ October 22nd, 2006, 11:52 am ]
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thanks to both of ya's :)
Author:  elvishjedipirate [ October 30th, 2006, 7:28 pm ]
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sniff. that's how i feel right now.
Author:  Lady Elenriel [ October 31st, 2006, 3:39 am ]
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Nice poem TN and I believe that almost everyone (if not everyone) can relate to the feeling at one point or another. I also tend to like to read shorter poems, and you captured the emotion of the piece very well. Great job! :-D
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