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Author:  Anduril Vanlhach [ October 1st, 2006, 10:47 am ]
Post subject:  2 + 2 = 5

The Void of Chaos

A twisting infinate space
That pushed against the mind
A thing without sunstance or face
That watched you from behind

A Chaos which threated to engulf
The Void in which it screamed
The tragedy of the self
The nightmare of the dream. (TM)

Meditation

Black is not white and white is not black
Hate is not love and if love is not hate
Fear is not joy and joy is not fear
Then what is the mind, but a joyous tear?(TM)

Author:  Guest [ October 1st, 2006, 11:39 am ]
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aww..thats a sad poem !!! its great Anduril

Author:  Anduril Vanlhach [ October 1st, 2006, 3:48 pm ]
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thanks Truenarn, but its not ment to be sad, its ment to be a reflection of the inner soal of the teenager, the conflicit inside us all, the balance bettwen dark and light and how they are in fact the same thing, destroying everything once that fact is realised. This is one of those few poems where you can read a lot into it.

Author:  Aramel Elyanwe [ October 1st, 2006, 3:51 pm ]
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Awesome, but what's with the 2+2=5? :bounce:

Author:  Guest [ October 1st, 2006, 3:55 pm ]
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LOL....yeah..2+2=4!!!

maybe just to get this thread attetion..it sure drew my attetion

Author:  Anduril Vanlhach [ October 1st, 2006, 4:05 pm ]
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yeah, and also in 1984, thats what the Party eventually make Winston belive in the end, its the twisting of the obviose truth.

Author:  Aramel Elyanwe [ October 1st, 2006, 4:10 pm ]
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Interesting... :bounce:

Author:  Anduril Vanlhach [ October 2nd, 2006, 2:01 pm ]
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thankyou.

Author:  Jax Nova [ October 2nd, 2006, 3:22 pm ]
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Nice job anduril... And I can see what you mean by being able to read into it. I could get several things out of it.. a lot of things actually. lol But all the same nicely done. :)

Author:  Anduril Vanlhach [ October 3rd, 2006, 4:10 pm ]
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thanks...i have my own interpretation, but i want everyone to take away something indivigual from it. I can't change the world, but maybe i can influence a few peole in some small way.

Author:  Jax Nova [ October 4th, 2006, 6:41 pm ]
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Yeah. :)

Author:  Anduril Vanlhach [ October 5th, 2006, 4:00 pm ]
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Meditation

Black is not white and white is not black
Hate is not love and if love is not hate
Fear is not joy and joy is not fear
Then what is the mind, but a joyous tear?

Author:  Jax Nova [ October 5th, 2006, 5:43 pm ]
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*claps* That's cool, I like it. Nice work. :)

Author:  Anduril Vanlhach [ October 6th, 2006, 5:17 pm ]
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thankyou nothing on your'e stuff of course, but i am slightly obsssed with oppasits being the smae thing, so most of my work is like that.

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