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Post subject: ...... ( A poem)  Posted: October 2nd, 2006, 3:30 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Blindly I step aside,
Unaware of the pain you can bring.
Knowingly I will abide,
Aware of the death song you sing.
Who are you?
What are you?
Where are you?
Why can't I see you now,
Your so far away yet so near.
I don't really know how,
You provoked this internal fear.
Will I ever see you?
Will I ever touch you?
Will I ever know you?
Blindly I step in the way,
Aware of the pain you can bring.
Knowingly I step aside,
Unaware of the death song you sing.
Were you?
Are you?
Will you be?
I can see you now,
Your so near yet so far away.
It is evident how,
You provoked internal fear today.
Have I seen you?
Have I touched you?
Have I known you?
You broke my heart,
When my heart you took.
You tore me appart,
With a single look.
You darkened my sky,
You shatered my will.
You still make me cry,
You shater me still!
How I long for the day that we shall unite,
When Heavens lights are shining bright.
How I long for the day that all this will end,
And I can be happy again.
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Post subject: Posted: October 2nd, 2006, 5:44 pm |
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OMG this is so sad! & so pretty!! .....wuts it about, if u don't mind me asking? I really like it.....it's just sorta.....idk how to explain it.....sad. that's the only thing i can think of 2 describe, although i dont think it's the word i'm looking for......
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Post subject: Posted: October 3rd, 2006, 1:50 pm |
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Basicly it describes emotions for me...
Kind of how you wish something would happen or you wish a certain thing. And if it were to happen or your wish would come true you would be very happy.
But all that happens is you keep being reminded of your wish through life still hopping and trying to make it come true all the time it just makes you more depressed and sad because it's not happening... So yeah... it's a sad poem. lol
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Post subject: Posted: October 3rd, 2006, 4:08 pm |
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aw, that's so sad! Now that you told me that I can totally see it.......& I can totally relate. aw.....idk wut to say! just it's sad!  lol _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: October 4th, 2006, 6:37 pm |
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Yeah... tell me about it...
On second thought.. don't tell me about it. It's to depressing.
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Post subject: Posted: October 4th, 2006, 9:44 pm |
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Yeah, it is sad. But that's wut poetry's for.......to try and express yourself when it's hard for words by themself to.....that's wut writing & music do for me.....that's why they mean so much to me, know wut i mean?
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Post subject: Posted: October 5th, 2006, 5:49 pm |
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Yeah, that's egsactily what they do for me. 
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Post subject: Posted: October 5th, 2006, 6:09 pm |
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good 'ol music & writing!! lol  _________________
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Post subject: Posted: October 6th, 2006, 4:37 pm |
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Yup! lol
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Post subject: Posted: October 6th, 2006, 4:38 pm |
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lol. _________________
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Post subject: Posted: October 6th, 2006, 7:47 pm |
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I love it, Jax!! It really conveys great emotion- very bittersweet in a way. Wonderfully done!!
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Post subject: Posted: October 7th, 2006, 4:38 pm |
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bittersweet! yes, that's the word! very bittersweet!! _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: October 7th, 2006, 5:46 pm |
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Glad you liked it Arwen.
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