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Author:  ethelfleda [ October 14th, 2006, 6:21 am ]
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here's a poem i wrote partly based on hamlet and partly based on my own experiences:

To die...

Too much hurt for me to take –
Sometimes I fear that I may break.
Events conspire to cause me pain,
Ache my heart and pound my brain.
I long to die and be set free.
How wonderful to cease to be!
Violent thoughts spin round my head
But I cannot act with limbs of lead.
The weight of conscience weighs me down
For to this life I have been bound.
Dare I risk Almighty’s wrath
By straying from His chosen path?
I must choose twixt life and death –
Solid flesh or final breath –
But can I gamble eternal life
Just to ease my earthly strife?
I would my own quietus make
But there is just too much at stake.

what do you reckon?
Author:  meleth_legolas [ October 15th, 2006, 6:06 am ]
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Well.... I feel like kiling myself lotsa times....I tried the other day(in pool) really hard though :disgust:
Author:  ethelfleda [ October 15th, 2006, 7:36 am ]
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that's an awful thing to say and if that's how you feel, i'm praying for you. i was suicidal for several years, so i know what it feels like to be in that place, but i pulled through and now i've found incredible peace and joy in god - things can and do get better if you only HOLD ON. the whole point of the poem is that there's too much to lose by suicide - life is precious so hold on to it.
Author:  Ms.Gamgee [ October 16th, 2006, 6:34 pm ]
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Oh wow, glad to see you're not suicidal, it's axtually very beautiful in it's own little way. I guess this is the way that a lot of people feel when it's just terrible. But great job on this!!
Author:  meleth_legolas [ October 16th, 2006, 11:30 pm ]
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Yea, the poem is really good..I really like it and i like writing poems myself actually
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