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Author: | ethelfleda [ October 14th, 2006, 6:21 am ] |
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here's a poem i wrote partly based on hamlet and partly based on my own experiences: To die... Too much hurt for me to take – Sometimes I fear that I may break. Events conspire to cause me pain, Ache my heart and pound my brain. I long to die and be set free. How wonderful to cease to be! Violent thoughts spin round my head But I cannot act with limbs of lead. The weight of conscience weighs me down For to this life I have been bound. Dare I risk Almighty’s wrath By straying from His chosen path? I must choose twixt life and death – Solid flesh or final breath – But can I gamble eternal life Just to ease my earthly strife? I would my own quietus make But there is just too much at stake. what do you reckon? |
Author: | meleth_legolas [ October 15th, 2006, 6:06 am ] |
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Well.... I feel like kiling myself lotsa times....I tried the other day(in pool) really hard though ![]() |
Author: | ethelfleda [ October 15th, 2006, 7:36 am ] |
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that's an awful thing to say and if that's how you feel, i'm praying for you. i was suicidal for several years, so i know what it feels like to be in that place, but i pulled through and now i've found incredible peace and joy in god - things can and do get better if you only HOLD ON. the whole point of the poem is that there's too much to lose by suicide - life is precious so hold on to it. |
Author: | Ms.Gamgee [ October 16th, 2006, 6:34 pm ] |
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Oh wow, glad to see you're not suicidal, it's axtually very beautiful in it's own little way. I guess this is the way that a lot of people feel when it's just terrible. But great job on this!! |
Author: | meleth_legolas [ October 16th, 2006, 11:30 pm ] |
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Yea, the poem is really good..I really like it and i like writing poems myself actually |
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