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Posted: November 12th, 2006, 2:35 pm

Guest

Hold on,
dont let go,
take my hand,
with you at my side,
I can achieve.

I can face,
whirling winds,
salty sea's,
breathtaking horrors,
anything I please.

Just a bit of
Encouragement and hope
from you, I can achieve,
dont you see,
how much you mean to me?

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Posted: November 12th, 2006, 2:39 pm

Lady Erana

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Joined: 03 November 2005
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Location: Austria

That's a wonderful poem, Arya! I really like it! :hug:

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Posted: November 12th, 2006, 2:44 pm

Guest

Thanks Erana! :hug:

I actually did better on my rhyimg this time.

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Posted: November 13th, 2006, 6:27 pm

Snowbird

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Joined: 11 November 2006
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Yes!! Great bit of poetry. I like how it flows.

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Posted: November 13th, 2006, 6:47 pm

Guest

Thanks snowbird.

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