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Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ November 7th, 2006, 8:45 pm ]
Post subject:  "Horror" (typoes and etc. fixed)
Pallid moon shines,
Dreary house still.

A shadow passes,
Crying innocence.

Blood is spilled,
Blades soaked in gore.

Phantoms screech,
Hiding dead faces.

Thunder explodes,
Grim abode exposed.

A skull lies barren,
Demanding its due.

Souls wail,
My heart beats fast.

Death arrives,
Scythe in hand.

Despaired I cry,
"Horror!"

My light lost
In reaper's shade.
Author:  Aramel Elyanwe [ November 11th, 2006, 4:20 pm ]
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Whoa... :blink:

Great poem! Very discriptive and a little scary... :bounce:
Author:  Guest [ November 11th, 2006, 5:54 pm ]
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Excellent!! I totally love scary, death poems. :)
Author:  Snowbird [ November 11th, 2006, 9:51 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Horror
Witch_King_of_Angmar wrote:
Palid moon shines,
Dreary house still.

A skull lies barren,
Demanding its due.

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I love that line! That was definately horrific, if you don't mind my saying so. It was very terse and very well written, and said so much without sounding really wordy. Well done! You know you can write poetry when it sends shivers up someone's spine... :bones: :vampire:
Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ November 11th, 2006, 10:02 pm ]
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Thank you, this little poem came after an intense Edgar Allan Poe reading session.
Author:  Snowbird [ November 13th, 2006, 6:25 pm ]
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A Poe fan?????? Goodness!! I love Edgar Allen Poe's writing. Have you read, "The Masque of Red Death" by him? Ooooh... veeery creepy. :) Still, now I can really see how that poem could be Poe inspired.
Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ November 13th, 2006, 8:43 pm ]
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Yes, I've read it several times, have you read "The City In the Sea"?
Author:  Snowbird [ November 14th, 2006, 4:55 pm ]
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City in the Sea? No, I actually haven't but I would love to. Now I think I'll make a point to check it out! :) Do you like any of his poetry, Poe's that is?
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