Thanks, Snowbird.
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| Author: | Guest [ November 14th, 2006, 6:54 pm ] |
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cant stop. Just die. I cant take this...just.. just let me die. Dont wanna be alive, dont wanna be happy, just kill....kill me, till the pain goes away. Who would care if I was gone? who would weep..who would mourn? Would you care? Would anyone care? My body bleeding, in pain. At Death's door, I will go today. No one will stop me. Because No one cares, they would be happy, if I went away. Pain would be gone. I would have no more sorrows... No more conflicts..no more nothing. I would be dead. The dead dont think...the dead aren't miserable...all the dead are dead alike. |
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| Author: | Lady Erana [ November 14th, 2006, 8:30 pm ] |
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That's a very impressive and depressing poem, Saphira! What was your inspiration when you wrote this poem? |
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| Author: | Guest [ November 14th, 2006, 9:27 pm ] |
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Because that's how I feel exactly when I wrote it. It was nice just to write what I felt like down on paper.. |
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| Author: | Snowbird [ November 14th, 2006, 11:54 pm ] |
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Very... intense. But great I think. Poetry seems to come so easily when I have a really strong emotion about something! |
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| Author: | Guest [ November 15th, 2006, 2:10 pm ] |
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Thanks, Snowbird.
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