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Poem - 'Gone From View' (rated PG/PG-13)
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Author:  Enneleyn [ November 25th, 2006, 1:00 pm ]
Post subject:  Poem - 'Gone From View' (rated PG/PG-13)

This came in a flash of inspiration, after reading 'The Two Towers' and 'Return of the King' for the umpteenth time... 8)

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Dawn of day, cool morning breeze
Unfurls banners, snapping high;
Sunlight glints off shields, no ease,
Helms speak a silent war cry.

Jingle of tack, stamp of hoof,
Farewells are spoken, thouqh brief;
Voice lifts in song, none aloof,
The duty accepted in lief.

A neigh, a cry, the sounding horn,
And pursuit begins anew;
With spear and bow, on promise sworn,
In a blink, all gone from view.

Author:  Guest [ November 25th, 2006, 1:58 pm ]
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Great job Ennelynn :)

Author:  Snowbird [ November 25th, 2006, 4:19 pm ]
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WOW that was GREAT!!! I love the rhyming... that takes time and TALENT. Great job!!

Author:  Kitoky [ November 29th, 2006, 8:40 pm ]
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Please put a rating for your poem/fanfic! Thank you!

Author:  Eruraina [ December 25th, 2006, 10:13 pm ]
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That is great! That should be the song Pippin sings to Denethor in the RotK! It so fits perfectly! Better than the one he sings in the movie!

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