Wow. That's an amazing poem! It's just soooo powerful and I can really sense the desperation and agony in it. Great piece, very very well done.
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ November 25th, 2006, 1:26 pm ] |
| Post subject: | "Judgement" (Rating - G) |
The moon afloat, Silence around A heart cries out, "When will come My judgement true?!" To cold night sky The soul aflame, Desperation abounds A phantom wails, "Desperate heart, your judgement shan't come!" To the seraph fallen |
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| Author: | Snowbird [ November 25th, 2006, 4:18 pm ] |
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Wow. That's an amazing poem! It's just soooo powerful and I can really sense the desperation and agony in it. Great piece, very very well done. |
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| Author: | Kitoky [ November 29th, 2006, 8:40 pm ] |
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Please put a rating for your poem/fanfic! Thank you! |
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ December 10th, 2006, 1:02 pm ] |
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(ahem) BUMP! |
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