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Post subject: The Legend of Fyresong and Evan Posted: November 25th, 2006, 9:03 pm |
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Rated PG because I have absolutely no clue why.
This is my first fanfic, don't laugh too much. This is where a few of the characters of my story get transported into middle earth and meet the fellowship.
I am not going to change the plotline of Tolkien's story-too much. I hope people don't mind if I tweak the story a bit. It's not like I'm gonna publish it or anything.
Here is the prologue: The battle of the Last Alliance and the Appearence of Fyresong and Evan. NOTE: I did change a little of the plot because I have Fyresong face Sauron, and nearly defeat him and then he goes and kills people and Isulder takes the ring.
Of the Appearance of Fyresong and Evan
At the battle of the Last Alliance, something happened tht fortold many events after. The skies were darkened, and the air was heavy upon the breath of men. They were right outside Mordor, the black land of Sauron himself. There was a deathly silence, for they were going into battle, when a great figure of light appeared before them.
Some thought it was a Maia. Otheres said it was a pspirit, a tormented soul of someone long dead. Yet even as they watched, the light faded and dwas replace by a figure. It was not a figure of a spirit, or even one or the Maiar, but of a human girl.
She was strong and fair, yet smaller in stature, for both elves and men stood taller than her. Here hair was golden brown, and upon her head was a rown of fire-red feathers. With a blade in her hand, and clad in dragon-like armor, she looked dangerous. Her eyes gleamed out, which is what made her so strange_her eyes were the color or molten metal and had slits for pupils.
The men and elves stood warily as she approached, so caught up in her strange appearance, that they didn't notice the strange figure beside her. He was only about four feet tall, and had great shining eyes of emerald. In his had he held a staff, with a jewel the same color of his eyes set in it.
"Hail! I am Fyresong, daughter of dragons, and my companion is Evan. He is a Terran,(a race I invented) if you are wondering about that. Why do you wait outside this black land?" The girl spoke, her voice powerful and mysterious.
Gil-galad, the Elvenking, stepped in front of his host.
"What is it you are doing here? Are you a spy of Sauron?"
Evan said, "Sauron? We would never serve him in a thousand years. And what of you? Whose side are you on?"
"We are oposing the Dark Lord(or whatever they call him)Even now, we are going into battle against him."
"Well then," said Fyresong, "We are with you the whole way, for I shall battle Sauron unto death. He is my mortal foe."
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Upon the peaks of Orodruin was a battle that was sung about for ages. The battle of Sauron and Fyresong. He had the power of the Ring, and the strength that of many elves. Fyresong wielded the great power of fire, an elven blade in one hand, a flaming whip in the other. Evan was with the main host of the Last Alliance-he does not come into this part of the tale.
Ever Sauron struck out at her, but she dodged his blows, and laughed at him, saying, "You cannot conquer me! Your ring does me no harm. Give up, or it shall be your death!"
Then she set the whip around his legs, and cast him apon the ground. Fyresong took her blade and raised it high. "For Middle Earth," she said, and stabbed him with all her strength. Sauron screeched, and faded away into the darkness. Fyresong, thinking he was dead, watched the battle of the Last Alliance from above.
Yet the power of the Ring could not be undone. Because of her mistake, Isuldir's(I don't know how to spell it!)father fell into shadow, and even though he took the ring from the body of Sauron, she sealed the doom of many. Fyresong and Evan marched with the host of Isulder, so they were there when he was ambushed.
The orcs came upon them, catching Fyresong and Evan by suprise. Many orcs they slew, yet Isuldir was killed. In the heat of battle, both of them escaped, thinking the battle to be death of both of them. So it was that the One Ring was lost.
THIS IS THE TIMELESS TALE OF FYRESONG AND EVAN, THE YET UNKNOWN CHARACTERS OF LORD OF THE RINGS.
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Last edited by Fyresong on December 5th, 2006, 5:16 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post subject: Posted: November 29th, 2006, 8:38 pm |
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Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 15181 Location: Minas Morgul
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Please put a rating for your poem/fanfic! Thank you!
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Post subject: Posted: November 30th, 2006, 5:46 pm |
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whats a rating?
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Post subject: Posted: December 2nd, 2006, 9:48 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: December 4th, 2006, 5:45 pm |
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Oh...its like between PG and PG-13. I'm not sure.
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Post subject: Posted: December 4th, 2006, 8:09 pm |
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Make sure you put your rating rage either in your title or at the top of your first post.
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Post subject: Posted: December 4th, 2006, 10:44 pm |
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I think, Fyresong, it's a PG. I don't see anything PG-13 about it.
Good fanfic, I really enjoyed it. I'll go ahead and vote now 
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Post subject: Posted: December 5th, 2006, 5:15 pm |
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Danke! You know, theres more to it.
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Post subject: Posted: December 10th, 2006, 5:28 pm |
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Here is the first chapter of the Legend. You see, Fyresong and Evan don't come into the tale of the Fellowship until the Council of Elrond and all that stuff.
*Note* this story is told from Fyresong's point of view.
Chapter 1: Of the Coming of Fyresong to Imladris
The day was bright and fair, the sun shining above my head. I yawned, glancing out to the mountians is the east. The misty mountains. I snorted. A rediculous name. Even someone with half a brain could think of that name.
"Where do you think we should be going?" Evan asked. We had travelled through the Gap of Rohan because I was searching for a great power that I sensed.
"How am I supposed to know? That power I sensed earlier seems to be coming from all directions at once," I replied back. It was true. The power was growing, and coming ever nearer. I just didn't know where it was, and that was the most important thing of all.
" Well," I said brightly, "we came from the east so I know its not there. To the south, there practically is nothing down there on this side of the mountains. To the west, well, I'm not sure about that. But I don't think the power is in that direction. My best bet is to head north. Besides I think we forgot something."
"What?" Evan asked.
"Imladris."
"Imladris? You mean Rivendell? But why would we want to go there?"
"Because, idiot, that's where Elrond lives." My voice began to get testy.
"Oh. Who's Elrond?"
I rolled my eyes and resisted the impulse to strangle him. Sometimes, Evan could really get on my nerves.
" He was in the battle of the Last Alliance, stupid. You have a really bad short term memory," I said.
"I wouldn't call a few hundred years short," he replied with just enough sarcasm to blow my top off.
" I don't care! But that's where we are heading, and nowhere else!"
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I finally convinced Evan to come with me to Imladris. I called for my steed, Freelance, and waited. Freelance soon came over, answering my call. He was a beautiful horse, with a black coat and silver mane.
Hello, my good friend. I whispered silently.
My lady, he said back, and stared at me with dark brown eyes.
"We have to ride?"Evan said.
"Yes. No complaints either." Before he could say anything else, I picked him up and set him on Freelance's back, then jumped up behind him.
"Hold on, Evan," I said, then called out," Noro lim, Freelance! To Imladris we go!"
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That's all I feel like to type for right now. It gives more insight into the characters' personalities, but doesn't really progress the story very much. Sorry 'bout that, but I'll be getting the rest up soon.
Kumquats, Kumquats, I like kumquats...actually I've never had one. I wonder what they taste like...
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