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 Post subject: "Judgement" (Rating - G)
PostPosted: November 25th, 2006, 1:26 pm 
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The moon afloat,
Silence around

A heart cries out,
"When will come
My judgement true?!"
To cold night sky

The soul aflame,
Desperation abounds

A phantom wails,
"Desperate heart, your
judgement shan't come!"
To the seraph fallen


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PostPosted: November 25th, 2006, 4:18 pm 
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Wow. That's an amazing poem! It's just soooo powerful and I can really sense the desperation and agony in it. Great piece, very very well done.

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Please put a rating for your poem/fanfic! Thank you!

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PostPosted: December 10th, 2006, 1:02 pm 
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(ahem) BUMP!


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