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Silme Alata (Moonlight Radiance) -- Rating: G
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Author:  Aldawen [ December 11th, 2006, 7:15 pm ]
Post subject:  Silme Alata (Moonlight Radiance) -- Rating: G
This poem, though it doesn’t mention Middle-earth directly, portrays the almost mystical Elven wisdom that Middle-earth possesses. I’ve always loved to wander the forest at night, especially in the moonlight. There’s a sadness and thoughtfulness in the silence that you can’t experience anywhere else.

Among the glade
In forest deep
The moonlit earth
Its song did keep.

And shadowy light
Lay scattered there
Upon the floor
Of the forest bare.

Woven rays
Throughout the trees
Did cast their gleam
In faintest breeze.

What eyes behold
This dreamlike night?
What tears are shed
In silent sight?

Those who mourn
For times yet past
For times at hand
For times to last.

I rarely share my poems with anyone, so this is sort of weird for me...I know the rhyme scheme isn't followed exactly, but I normally prefer writing free-verse. The pattern just sort of fell in place unintentionally.
Author:  Elven Archer [ December 11th, 2006, 7:36 pm ]
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Oh my goodness, that is soo beautiful! I love it! You are a very good composer! :swoon:
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