Hey, that was pretty good. I like the variation in the verse lengths, makes it look more interesting. I've said it before, but you are quite a good writer, and I'm happily surprised to know that you are just as good at poetry.

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Thanks Haldir and Gil!
"You said: I know that this will hurt, but if I don't break your heart then things will just get worse..."

Faaaabulous, as I said before. I really love it.

Well done.

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"Without music, life would be a mistake." - Friedrich Nietzsche



"Make happy those who are near, and those who are far will come."

Fwee!

I only speak the truth! And it certainly does

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Thanks Haldir and Gil!
"You said: I know that this will hurt, but if I don't break your heart then things will just get worse..."

That's beautiful! I really like the rythym!

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