Nice job! I liked it.
It's different but ia good way.
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 4th, 2007, 12:20 am ] |
| Post subject: | "Fall of Man" (PG/PG-13) |
I hearken in the bloody hour, Kings at war for their interest, Rot eating the red flowers, Death has taken our nation's best. Nations on their knees forced down, Fabled cities lain to waste, All have abandoned the old town, Leaving in the greatest haste, Wishing mercy from a crown, Tasting such a horrible taste From the Great King's frown, On his monument praised. The Fall of Man is nigh, Under the immortal sky, Powers watching faintly sigh, As they bejeweled gaily fly. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ January 5th, 2007, 2:31 pm ] |
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Nice job! I liked it. It's different but ia good way.
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ January 5th, 2007, 6:12 pm ] |
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told yha i'd read sum of ur poetry! lol hey, it's really good....It rhymes really good, but it's not forced....very hard 2 do, & u do it nicely....keep it up. It's depressing, but good.....i like depressing poems...Nice job.
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