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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ January 13th, 2007, 5:07 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Random Poem...Rated G....though it is a little depressing... |
Randomly popped in my head. lemme know wut u think. thanks:) So many feelings, Yet no words to express. So many emotions, For words I don’t possess. So many tears, Yet eyes are dry. So many fears, Though I can’t explain why. So much hurt; So much pain. So much fear; Drives me insane. 
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 13th, 2007, 8:48 pm ] |
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Fantastic! The rhyming is also carried out smoothly. |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ January 13th, 2007, 9:35 pm ] |
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aw, thanks. 
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ January 15th, 2007, 12:17 pm ] |
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Same here. Very lovely. Liked the rythm and rym and all of it. And I really like the picture you chose to put it on as well I think it fits really nicely.
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ January 15th, 2007, 1:03 pm ] |
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thanks, jax....i had sum trouble finding a good pic....but once i saw that one, i was like, yup, that's perfect. lol thanks again i appreciate it 
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| Author: | Lady Elenriel [ January 15th, 2007, 6:38 pm ] |
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Awesome work pip. I love the rhythm and rhyme of the piece. I also love the mysterious feel it has to it as well. Great job! 
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ January 16th, 2007, 4:54 pm ] |
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thanks
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| Author: | Snowbird [ January 16th, 2007, 8:22 pm ] |
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Wow! I love the way you illustrated that one! |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ January 16th, 2007, 10:49 pm ] |
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aw, thank you. i appreciate it
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