lol thanks.
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ January 26th, 2007, 1:50 pm ] |
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Falling falling deep inside, Hearts in twined and bound. Together all the time's we've cried, And brought out sorrows sound. Falling falling deep within, A soul and souls inside. I've told You everything, all my sin, You know the times I've "died" I'm falling, falling Saviour Lord, Catch me as You do! You see my God, this falling word, I'm falling deep in love with You. |
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| Author: | The Nightingale [ January 28th, 2007, 8:23 am ] |
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I LOVE all your poetry, Jax Nova! It's absolutely beautiful. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ January 29th, 2007, 12:54 pm ] |
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lol thanks.
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| Author: | Eruraina [ January 29th, 2007, 8:30 pm ] |
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Thats wonderful! I love it, Jax! |
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| Author: | Mrs. Malfoy [ January 30th, 2007, 12:37 am ] |
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I must agree...I do like your poetry...you're very talented....the rhythem and rhyme scheme is very well done and very difficult to accomplish..... |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ January 31st, 2007, 1:06 pm ] |
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Thanks glad you all liked it.
I just hope I can do something with the talent everyone says I have. lol |
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| Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ February 2nd, 2007, 9:03 pm ] |
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I love it. You're just so good at poetry. 
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 3rd, 2007, 3:35 pm ] |
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lol thanks. I am just glad that God can take all this jumbled stuff and make it come out and make some sense to people. |
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| Author: | Eruraina [ February 3rd, 2007, 3:37 pm ] |
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You're such a good poet Jax! And I bet I'm not the fisrt to say that to you... You have a book out, right? |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ February 5th, 2007, 11:56 am ] |
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amazing. it's short, but it's like.....idk, it doesnt need anymore; like u got across everything u needed 2 say in only 3 stanzas....amazing. U really inspire me. Keep it up. You're amazing.
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 5th, 2007, 2:43 pm ] |
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Thanks everyone. I know I say it all the time but I am very glad you all like it. And it DOES mean more than you probabl realise.
Eruraina wrote: You're such a good poet Jax! And I bet I'm not the fisrt to say that to you... You have a book out, right?
Yeah, I do have a book out. It is on Amazon.com and several other places that I forget. lol But it is called "Inspired Poetry" By Jason Hein |
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