Very nice.
I like the flow.
It's a very interesting and deep subject. cool poem
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| Author: | [ m e m ] [ April 27th, 2008, 10:45 pm ] |
| Post subject: | The world ends Tomorrow |
Don't know why I wrote this. Hope you like it. The sky turns gray The world goes dark it's time to pay and now your falling apart Your dreams have just slipped out of your hand All you can do is hold it together with rubberbands The world ends tomorrow For you, anyways Your heart is filled with sorrow and there is no more sunny days The world still turns yet your frozen in time your eyes burn what a crime The world ends tomorrow For you, anyways you have been hit an arrow and your dieing in so many ways So let your world end tomorrow just don't let it fade away today. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ April 28th, 2008, 10:52 am ] |
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Very nice. I like the flow.
It's a very interesting and deep subject. cool poem |
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| Author: | [ m e m ] [ April 28th, 2008, 3:41 pm ] |
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Thanks Jax. |
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