Okay, so here's a poem I wrote about a character called Serena Reine, invented by SilverRose and me I won't reveal the entire storyline we're plotting, but let's just say she loses her heart to one of the LOTR guys ^_^ Heehee.
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Too cold inside to even reply to your explanation It's just another string of words, no need for conversation I know you won't stay here by my side A part me knows, and has died....
You were the stars, You were the bright light shining above You were my life You were everything I so desired to have But I must watch you build your life away from me And I am down below here, you won't even notice me...
I will retreat behind myself I won't speak to you, you won't know I was there Did your heart ever feel for me? I loved you so much, could you not see?
If only these dreams would turn into a living legacy The fragile hopes I held so dearly.
Pale stars shining above me The bright light has faded, you're my beautiful memory I can't escape it, you're the one that I loved You were it all, you were the stars above.
SERAGORNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOSH, GOLDIE!!!!! You art the official poem writer of Serena. This was so heartbreaking, so beautiful. I showed this to one of my RL friends, and she said it would make an amazing song...and I think she fell in love with it. I'll shalt bug you to write more of these, and now I want to write my own. We should keep a collection of Serena poems here!
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Hehehe, I guess I was right about which couple I thought it was. That's a very beautiful poem, Goldy! I agree that it would make a good song. It's just got that nice rhythm to it. *claps wildly*
Silvery, I'm glad you approve Thankeee! Glad your friend liked it too - ages ago I used to write tons of songs, with choruses and stuff, but lately I mostly write more poem style stuff - I often try to get a tune in my head though, like you do with songs
And Neri, thanks much for the wild clappinggg! Teehee
I do indeed approve! I used to write a lot of A/E type poetry that was actually very similar to yours in style, although not anywhere near as good. So....please write more!!! I'll try to come up with something soon and send it to you to critique. I shall end this with....SERAGORNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!! You have no idea how fun it is for me to write that. heehee
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I won't reveal the entire storyline we're plotting, but let's just say she loses her heart to one of the LOTR guys ^_^ Heehee.
This was so heartbreaking, so beautiful. I showed this to one of my RL friends, and she said it would make an amazing song...and I think she fell in love with it. 
I'll shalt bug you to write more of these, and now I want to write my own. We should keep a collection of Serena poems here!
That's a very beautiful poem, Goldy! I agree that it would make a good song. 
