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 Post subject: Primal - Walking Dead Story. [Chapter 28 out]
PostPosted: April 11th, 2013, 10:57 pm 
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This story will be linked to, because it's rated M.
Rated M because of explicit gore and some swearing.

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Prologue
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine
Chapter Ten
Chapter Eleven
Chapter Twelve
Chapter Thirteen
Chapter Fourteen
Chapter Fifteen
Chapter Sixteen
Chapter Seventeen
Chapter Eighteen
Chapter Nineteen
Chapter Twenty
Chapter Twenty-one
Chapter Twenty-two
Chapter Twenty-three
Chapter Twenty-four
Chapter Twenty-five
Chapter Twenty-six
Chapter Twenty-seven
Chapter Twenty-eight

I have wanted to write a zombie type story for a very long time, but I'm definitely scared that I'm messing it up. Opinions loved!

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 Post subject: Re: Primal - Walkind Dead Story. [Chapter 6 out]
PostPosted: April 15th, 2013, 5:02 pm 
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I've never read zombie type stories before, but this was a big incentive for me to start! I had only planned on scanning through the story but your prologue enticed me to read on the fourth chapter! The only reason I've stopped is my dire need to sleep, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest in the morning!
I'm actually quite jealous because I've always wanted to write fiction but I can never get the start right, but you have done this very well :)

Ps. I hope there's gonna be some epic fight for survival scenes to come!


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 Post subject: Re: Primal - Walkind Dead Story. [Chapter 6 out]
PostPosted: April 15th, 2013, 5:19 pm 
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Ah, oh my, thank you! :D

I didn't actually think anyone from here read them, but I just kept on posting anyway haha! And don't you worry, there's A LOT to come. I've got over 100 pages in word already written out. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Primal - Walkind Dead Story. [Chapter 6 out]
PostPosted: April 15th, 2013, 5:24 pm 
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Well I'm looking forward to them! :)


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 Post subject: Re: Primal - Walkind Dead Story. [Chapter 6 out]
PostPosted: April 15th, 2013, 7:29 pm 
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Yeah Bellatrix this is great! Cant wait to read more!

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 Post subject: Re: Primal - Walkind Dead Story. [Chapter 6 out]
PostPosted: April 15th, 2013, 7:32 pm 
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I can't even begin to explain how much that means to hear. :blush:

Don't worry, I'll put up the next chapter shortly, as soon as I'm done with the one I'm currently writing. Just look for the update in the thread title. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Primal - Walkind Dead Story. [Chapter 7 out]
PostPosted: April 15th, 2013, 10:52 pm 
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They're really good!! :D
Seriously. When I write, I only write good when I'm really interested in what I'm writing, and I don't even get to finish most of my stuff, but this is great :)

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 Post subject: Re: Primal - Walkind Dead Story. [Chapter 7 out]
PostPosted: April 16th, 2013, 6:23 am 
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I just finished reading all these chapters, they're very good! I like how the characters all have their own mysterious stories that we don't know about yet, I'm enjoying your story so far!


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 Post subject: Re: Primal - Walkind Dead Story. [Chapter 9 out]
PostPosted: April 17th, 2013, 1:34 pm 
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Thanks guys, I really appreciate it! Another chapter is out again!

And I'm struggling with where I am now, about 40 000 words ahead of you guys. :lol:

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 Post subject: Re: Primal - Walkind Dead Story. [Chapter 9 out]
PostPosted: April 17th, 2013, 6:08 pm 
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I like the timing of your chapters being released! I get a chapter per night for my bed time story! Keep them coming :)


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 Post subject: Re: Primal - Walkind Dead Story. [Chapter 9 out]
PostPosted: April 17th, 2013, 8:34 pm 
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Nienna Mithrandir wrote:
I like the timing of your chapters being released! I get a chapter per night for my bed time story! Keep them coming :)


Ah yes, I try to post at least once a day, and just posted again. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Primal - Walking Dead Story. [Chapter 13 out]
PostPosted: April 21st, 2013, 11:59 am 
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I am not a fan of The Walking Dead (I fear the series :/ ) but I am a big fan of your words; I shall read it...

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 Post subject: Re: Primal - Walking Dead Story. [Chapter 15 out]
PostPosted: April 21st, 2013, 12:26 pm 
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I hope you like it. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Primal - Walking Dead Story. [Chapter 15 out]
PostPosted: April 21st, 2013, 12:30 pm 
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This is turning out so unbelievably good!

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 Post subject: Re: Primal - Walking Dead Story. [Chapter 15 out]
PostPosted: April 21st, 2013, 12:50 pm 
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Bellatrix wrote:
I hope you like it. :)


I am sure that I will love it :) .

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 Post subject: Re: Primal - Walking Dead Story. [Chapter 15 out]
PostPosted: April 21st, 2013, 12:57 pm 
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Hahahahahaha I'm reading through it from the beginning, editing a few tiny things, and I'm so in love with my own writing hahaha. Not as in, it's absolutely amazing, but just as in I love the story and the characters so much. xD

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