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Post subject: "War From Unknown Lands"  Posted: November 10th, 2015, 2:00 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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"War From Unknown Lands"
Sounding, pounding, rustling leaves,
Quaking, breaking, the earth bereaves.
Up in the mountains the gate rises high,
The portal opens, the end draws nigh.
Clapping, snapping, thunderous flash,
Vamping, ramping, on to bash.
A fight is on hand from distant land,
The armies arrive and at the gate stand!
Moaning, Groaning, sighs of sorrow,
Stench, drenched, in the pains of tomorrow.
From where they came we still don't know,
So we've no idea to where we go.
Sounding, pounding, rustling leaves,
Quaking, breaking, the earth bereaves.
Up in the mountains the gate rises high,
The portal opens, the end draws nigh.
Cries, sighs, stanch determination,
Strong, with song, we march to obliteration.
They attacked us first from unknown land,
We simply return in hand.
Shaking, quaking, breaking....
Not is left but smoke and ash...
Two worlds broken from a choice so rash.
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Post subject: Re: "War From Unknown Lands" Posted: November 10th, 2015, 2:27 pm |
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Joined: 31 March 2014
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Location: Camped at the Sarn Ford Ranger Camp
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I really liked this! Very well done.
_________________ Top banner done by Thranduil.  
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Post subject: Re: "War From Unknown Lands" Posted: November 10th, 2015, 5:39 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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Thanks.  Glad you likes it!
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Post subject: Re: "War From Unknown Lands" Posted: November 10th, 2015, 10:37 pm |
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Joined: 06 January 2009
Posts: 658
Location: Wandering the forests of Mirkwood.
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Ooooh...this is really good!
The imagery was excellent, and I would love to read more. Well done.
_________________  Daughter of Erin Lunaire.
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Post subject: Re: "War From Unknown Lands" Posted: November 11th, 2015, 12:38 am |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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Thanks!  I am sure I will post more when I get a chance. But I'll be expecting to see some more of yours too!  I always enjoy a good read and reading my own stuff just doesn't cut it. Lol
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Post subject: Re: "War From Unknown Lands" Posted: November 11th, 2015, 12:46 am |
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Joined: 06 January 2009
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Location: Wandering the forests of Mirkwood.
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You're most welcome. I'm thinking of posting one of my other poems in a little bit actually. You mind-reader, you  _________________ Daughter of Erin Lunaire.
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Post subject: Re: "War From Unknown Lands" Posted: November 11th, 2015, 1:04 am |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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Sh.... No one can know!   Lol Well, I will have to check it out then!
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